Okay so I have altered the resume with the feedback from biz - what does biz think?
So some fellow Jow Forumsians (most probably americans) advised me that I should get rid of the Dominos position because "its just sad and infuriating", however this was a partime job that I'm currently doing being I am studying
Also what can be improved?
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I hope you're getting a STEM degree there m8. Bachelor of social science. Top kek.
why does it matter if i am studying STEM or not?
It’s the difference between unemployment and a 6 figures job
>bachelor of social science
Get used to dominos
I'm in social policy, its classified as an elite degree
Oh, sure thing mate...
That's adorable
I told you to use that resume builder.
Your design looks like fucking basic garbage.
>Novaresumes.com
Get a decent looking basic template with colour holy shit.
are you at a group of 8 uni or is it Newcastle or something?
You have way too much detail on your positions. An employer isn't going to read all that. Plus your second page has a lot of empty space.
Narrow it down to 2 pages, trim the previous positions details. Also get a more appealing template, use a template on overleaf if you know LaTeX or just do it on Google Docs or Libre Office. You don't want a Fisher Price CV, but adding some color details (like dark blue for headers) would be nice. And ffs delete "gaming" from your interests.
Hope you're larping fren. Who told you that, the uni themselves? Think - what economic value does it offer a business? None? So you're reliant on a government position being open, along with every other student of the same.
Here's an example. Notice how despite being full black and using a serif font, so still pretty classic, it looks more organized thanks to those lines.
And here's a more modern one I really like.
There's almost never a good reason for you to have a 2-page CV.
this Aus they will laugh at it
university of New England
The only difference here is the font
is this in america? because every resume I've seen in Aus have been in plain black and white
Well fonts help, but the space is overall more organized and again the lines help. He also went into a lot of detail, but I don't think he should have. Save that for the interview.
I'm not in America, this is a field thing, not a geographical one. Tech CVs have a tendency to look more like webpages, which might be a hipster thing, but it frankly looks more appealing. Also reserving the left column for dates is a smart organization helper.
I'll be kind.
The resume doesn't seem that bad. Obviously all your previous experience is unrelated bullshit but you're using colourful language to talk it up and try to bring it across into whatever this application is for.
As one user said, colour can make it pretty, but its the meat that matters. A little flair might just make it eye catching.
And its probably been covered, but make sure contact details are on there.
Good luck
P.S
Elite degree lel
>university of new england
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LITERALLY LOWEST RANKED AUS UNI HAHHAHA
I don't think you should remove Domino's. It's where you work, and it's not like you accepted that because you're clearly sending out resumes. I'd also make sure to make it more clear you're studying, I for one really admire people who work and study. If you make it into a single page resume, it will be more obvious.
Some inspiration: overleaf.com
This is what you need to read OP. Copy this format and your resume will looks heaps better
>AUSTRALIA