I’m completely lost and need a mentor. I need advice on my pitch for my startup I’m seeking funds for. I have raised $40k so far but this last $10k I need is proving to be a bitch.
This is the advice I have gotten so far:
>who have shown in the forums
which forums
>really want new innovative products
just sounds dumb. get rid of "new" obviously you're not selling used products - derp
>a forum of 26,000 dedicated glovers, word will spread like wildfire.
major assumption
>I am willing to exchange 20%
giving up this much equity is retarded. never start here. any investor that isn't a brainlet will negotiate. start much lower.
>for this amount because we have no sales yet. I am also willing to set aside $10,000 and another $5,000 to account for taxes to repay your investment.
makes you sound desperate and that you really don't think it will work. delete it.
i'll go on if you reply. but remember to sell the sizzle, not the steak. don't get into all the details, stick to the broad picture and the "dream". there are a lot of dumb people with money who will give it to you if you don't talk them out of it.
you're welcome. is the link to your info basically notes or are you sending it to potential investors? i guess the question i'm really asking is are you doing any in-person pitches? if this is what you're sending to people, it has way too much info. basically, you want to outline the size of the industry, which you did well, show your prototype, and then illustrate how you expect to generate sales. everything else should be removed. if someone asks for additional info, give it to them, but only when they ask. giving away 20% equity when you could've only given away 10%.