Ivan, CM from Olympus Labs here, please rate my article

Trust me, I've been doubting myself since the ICO and been reading up, watching and listening to as much info about Chainlink as possible.
I think it will succeed, and when it will, it'd be a glorious sight.

It might fail as a project or the whole crypto may go down with a black swan event, so I dont invest my lifesavings in it. I never did. This is why I actually still have to work, having invested very little in BTC in 2014.

I've got a family, a mortgage to pay off back at the old country (80% paid off), and a life to live at a new one.

I just really want us frens to make it.

Inb4 married cuck

>muhh israel
>muhh shlomo shekels
>muhh biz
>muhh bear
You FUCKING JEW!

I wish bro, I only qualify for the Law of Return (100% Jewish grandfather), I'm a goy in Israel, ((((they)))) call people like me "Russim" - Russian.

Christmas tree in Yaffo, south of Tel Aviv where the Arabs (mostly Christian but lots of Muslims too) live

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Any more opinions frens?

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I feel you bro :'(

You have a family, you have already made it.
That is ALL that matters.

it's aight m8

btw the expression is "I couldn't agree more" as in you agree so much there is no further amount of agreeing you can possibly do

Not the most popular opinion on Jow Forums for sure!
Good thing I was a nobody when we met, and we archieved everything together, supporting each other in times of need and despair.
I guess I did!
Wishing you folks to find what you are looking for in this life haha

>I read a quote somewhere on /biz that “2018 is the year of regulation, while 2019 will be the year of adoption”, and I can’t agree less
>I can't agree less

I think you got too excited there for a second fren, also I am sorry you got REQ'd.
And honestly, I don't know how I should feel about all the big banks joining the scene and creating a thousand derivatives and basically become the thing Bitcoin was built against. It's probably not a big issue since there's always going to be a some form of decentralized (privacy) coin. We fucked up Satoshi's vision but at least we're gonna get rich, I guess.

Oh shit, thanks for the correction.
How's the general English level of the article? Not my first language unfortunately but I do try.

Thanks for the feedback

It feels more like a rambling than a structured post. I advise you to take a look at the crypto oracle's articles. They do a good job of gradually introducing you to the point of the article.

Keep up the good job and ignore the salty fud comments here. They're just salty Neets.

I think Satoshi's vision for a decentralized distributed ledger system is getting fulfilled, with BTC or without.

But we can't just step in and 'break the old system' in a simple step. It's a complicated process of integration, adaptation and evolution IMO.

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Ivan this article is written in a strange first person narrative that is seeking approval. Instead of saying "I read an article etc" just direct quote it. The constant use of the 'I' shows a lack of confidence almost like a "don't blame me if it's wrong because I read it on website x" style of writing. Man up, be confident in your work. Re-read your article with what I have said in mind and see how often you use this style.

Thanks for this man, low confidence was always an issue for me since I was bullied a lot at school for low physical strength, good knowledge of English and weird, nerdy interests that no one there shared.

Rewritten a little bit, please let me know what you think now.

Thank you!
To be fair, I'm a little stoned and this is my first time, I will read up and try to make my next article a more structured and organized one.

Jews even jew themselves. Pottery

Unironically this. If I make it, it will probably change very little about my life for the better, other than I have promised to go save small churches as much as I can. I'm doubtful I'll be able to have a family, so in that way you really have made it more than some of us will.

I used to be a wreck with substance-abyse problems.
You just never fucking know what's really about to happen, but at least you can prepare for some variations.

Aye maybe we'll all make it in our own way

Today says hi.

Thanks for the feedback frens.
I will be back with a new article a few days later I hope.
Have a good day, wherever you are!

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The rewritten parts read much better now. I hadn't realised English was not your first language initially so it could be a nuance of style.

Another user mentioned reading the crypto-oracle articles and I would recommend looking at other successful writers. You'll see that they are authorative in their words. They wouldn't say "I hold coin x hoping for a rise Q1" they would say something like "Top picks q1: coin x due to developments y and z". It just reads more as they know what they are talking about.

I write and audit medical reports for a living.

Tosya*

Wew, this might mean I didn't completely lose my English skills acquired while I was studying in UK!

I will definitely read these articles and work further on my writing.
I'm glad to have consulted /biz haha