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Find my mistake
Hudson Martin
Alexander Gonzalez
you invoked the LE CURRENT YEAR meme
Jaxson Martinez
WE
Juan Wood
I don’t think you need the ‘therefore’ for point 4. A race’s right to exist is not contingent upon the good it has done in the past. Adding ‘therefore’ makes it sound like you are dog whistling that other races don’t have a right to exist.
Also, point 6 doesn’t seem to follow from the previous points, either delete it or include other points beforehand to back it up.
Nicholas Davis
Put a semicolon (;) at the end of lines 1-5 and line 7. Put periods at ends of 6 and 8.
Line 2: "light skinned" needs a hyphen between the words.
Line 6: I think this should say "a demographic majority."
Line 7: I suggest replacing "year 2018" with "current world sociopolitical environment."
Other than those corrections, I think it's excellent.
Eli Young
WUZ
Easton Ross
2¢ has been deposited into your account.
2cc of Jew cum has been deposited into your rectum.
Jeremiah Sullivan
If the "therefore" is not needed in point 4, does point 3 become irrelevant? Should it be removed?
For point 6, there are a few issues in play
1) there _were_ countries committed to white rule, but had white minorities. those didn't last
2) there _are_ countries with white majorities, but they are not committed to white preservation. they are also not going to last
So, I feel like 6 needs to be in there to set the stage for 7 and 8
Carson Peterson
thanks. For 6, I included political supremacy because strictly speaking, a majority white society isn't sufficient if there are, for instance, jewish overlords running everything.
We need to be explicit about this, so when we get around to saying "Jews cannot hold government offices", we can go point at the principles as to why..
Jonathan Gray
6) "demographic majority" should be "only demographic"
Parker Nelson
Point two should be clarified. 'Ashkenazi jews are not considered white' or something like that but better
Jaxon Martinez
Point 3 would no longer form part of an argument, but it might stand on its own as a bold challenge against those who see whiteness as evil. I guess it depends on your audience and your goals with this writing.
I understand that point 6 is important in building up to the later points. But why is political supremacy necessary for preservation? Consider a hypothetical country that was 99% white, with very tight borders, but where minorities had all the same rights as whites. Wouldn’t such a country still effectively preserve whites?
Luke Foster
>I guess it depends on your audience and your goals with this writing.
HIs goal with the writing is to trigger antiwhites into revealing their racism against our people, and voicing their intent to exterminate us.
It isn't a document like this that attracts more whites to our side. It's our opponents' reactions to it that do that.
Kayden Perez
I approve of this but there's a one problem I see:
>2. We affirm that the white race exists, and is the group of light skinned people with European ancestry.
This part "light skinned people with European ancestry" is an issue to me, I'd imagine you'd probably get a lot of people you don't really want i.e. that you wouldn't consider white, namely pale Middle-Easterners.
I also don't like the idea of the "white race", I prefer to think nationalistically in terms of the various sub-races via nationality, Britons, Germans, French etc. Unfortunately in the situation we're in maybe a "white race" is the best shot we have.
America is too far gone, best attempt would be to try it in European states.
Christian Ortiz
Gabriel Miller
>Find my mistake
This is never going to get through Congress by the end of 2018
Ian Ortiz
>audience and your goals
The audience is normies.
The goal is to create a min-bar of agreement. If you can agree with this, you're my ally. If you cannot, you're our enemy. If you cannot agree with this, you have some other priority or consideration above and beyond the assured survival of white people.
I don't want to put something in here that I feel is negotiable, or raises the difficulty of agreement. I want to include everything that is needed, and nothing that isn't.
My contention is that white political supremacy is needed because the country must exist for the explicit purpose of preserving whites. I suppose it is technical possible that the government could be run by non-white alien overlords who also want the country to expressly exist to preserve whites [even though they aren't white], the way that we run zoos and conservation centers to preserve animals...
But I think that's an edge case.
Angel Mitchell
Good point. I want a principle that makes sense to people, and I don't want to try and stuff the entire Nuremberg laws in there.
One idea I had was to further add "who identify as white" as an additional part, e.g. "people of light skinned ancestry, of European descent, and who identify themselves as white"
Leo Watson
>Trump will not win this election
Meme Magic
Ryder Hernandez
Number one is wrong.
Juan Carter
So whachu sayin iz: its okay to be white?
Joseph Diaz
U saying this cuz you’re half asian or something
Leo Gutierrez
We know the quote is real because it has his picture beside it!!!
Also, please kill yourself.
Robert Perez
I heard Jow Forums is diverse. In June, i made this, good one?
Justin Cruz
I don’t think the edge case is so edge. Your political “overlords” don’t have to be exclusively of another race. They don’t even have to be a representative sample of the country’s (majority white) population, since whites will naturally outperform many of the minorities in that country without any special privileges.
Parker Fisher
bump
Kevin Carter
The white race is the most aggresive and savage race in history, they must be stopped before they sperg out once more
Joshua Richardson
should just put
>'we the color of the stars nigga'
black twitters rage will do the marketing work for you
Lincoln Nguyen
They don’t commit most crime per population.
Unless you call “building great empires” as “sperging out”
If they’re great at fighting and making weapons, that’s not a bad thing
Luke Perez
>Make two world wars
>Colonize all over the world
>Compare all the killings with some crimes
Kek, if its by violence you whiteys should be put in gas chambers
Kayden Garcia
4. desû. Rights are a meme
Bentley Bennett
Thanks everyone. Appreciate the feedback, keep it coming. I'll check thread in the morning and work on a new version.
Grayson Gomez
Whites:
>Write history
Africans:
>die as one of the 17 children in the family, in a tribe war, famine, or from AIDS.
>repeat as long as Africa exists
David Cruz
Don't do the semicolons, that's autismo. Everything else he said is fine
Jonathan Stewart
this
Dylan Cooper
wrong on no. 2 already
grossly simplified and arbitrary on multiple levels
this is why no one takes you seriously
Josiah Lewis
This is terribly written.
Source: English teacher
Nathaniel Thomas
SEND THIS TO THE UNITED NATIONS! IF THE POLYNESIAN JUNGLE NIGGERS CAN RAMBLE THERE, WE CAN TOO!