Anyone willing to rate my Sister's skit/parody video that i helped edit for her college class? (Youtube link below and context below) - please leave any ideas if you can think of ways to improve
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My sister is doing a project as a part of her creative arts/film class in college where they have to start a skit/tv series over the course of the semester doing 6 episodes like this (1 minute to 3 minutes long)
For hers because she is 4'11 in height she wanted to base hers on a episode/series called 'the life of a short girl' and do funny little skits in the show.
Anyways, long story short because i have done a lot of dicking around with Adobe Premiere she asked me to help edit it. This is one of my final drafts at this point. Im not a pro by any means ive just done this a lot for editing twitch videos.
My question is how does this look thus far and if there anything i should change? Basically did i do a half decent job? It became 0:55 long in length which might actually be a good thing.
god damn i didnt know abgs still existed. shes hot tho op. sucks that your sister prob gets dicked down by tyrones on the reg
Logan Johnson
What does abg mean? We are asian not aboriginal if thats what you mean.
And thats not cool. Please dont go there.
Adam Cook
IMAGINE
Alexander Robinson
dude she's gettin smashed on the regular. Especially by tyrone. That's not just acting.
Grayson Gray
Fuck off. Seriously.
Im not going to give a reaction so go elsewhere. That guy has a black girlfriend. Shes a good actor and is a over achiever so she puts her all into every course or class.
Julian Myers
yeah and that dude's been putting his all into her willing pussy
Andrew Foster
Seriously man.. really?? Thats my sister.... do you know how awkward that is. Chill out or please get off my thread
Ethan Bell
Is she really short? Cuz damn her mouth is the same height as his dick. She doesnt even need to bend down to give him a blowjob. Nice.
Hunter Cooper
Shes 4'11 and please fuck off man. thats my sister. think if the roles were reversed and that was your sister
Gavin Phillips
I would still say the same thing. Because its true. Tyrone probably stuck his cock in her mouth. Its ok. Its normal.
Juan Lopez
I would love to fuck your sister OP And no idea how to improve the video. I think it's okay. Gell her she should drop her panties in the next clip though, so I can masturbate to it
Colton Allen
Not that user but I can see your sister getting her hole resized by that niggardly person there.
Matthew Morales
asian baby girl. essentially a ghetto thot asian girl
Oliver Price
Stop feeding the trolls, firstly.
Just get the video over the 1 minute mark and you're good.
Lastly, stop being childish! Your sister is an adult and is gonna get fvcked if she so chooses. Your only worry should be her safety.
Parker Brown
Ur sister is hot bro
Hudson Morales
Pacing is WAY too fast, also the audio SEVERELY needs to be levelled out. A better microphone is a neccessity as well. Also god DAMN she is cute.
Adrian Green
Thank you for the honesty!
Julian Cooper
This makes my penis the big penis
Jace Ramirez
Learn how to speak English. If you’re trolling then fuck off. If not then this is a 55 second horror spoof so you might be gay.
Jaxon Robinson
@OP - I think the best part is when he picks her up and puts her over his shoulders. Would’ve been better if he maybe spanked her ass right then and there.
Really....? Listen you can say what you want and be a creep - that is fine I’ll just ignore you and you can feel sorry for yourself. But taking screenshots like this crosses a line
>posts video of hot sister on Jow Forums >is surprised by replies You should have known better.
Tyler Rivera
No. Fuck off ive removed the video now
Liam Morris
hahahahahahaha what the fuck did you think was gonna happen?
Cooper Brown
its okay ive made a copy already its uploading now
John White
>deletes the video >doesn’t just delete the thread
Caleb Reed
Is this one of those reverse "personal army" attempts where OP tries to make it seem like he doesn't want people to cyber harass someone? Bad attempt and I'll have nothing to do with it.
Oliver Peterson
This is not OP’s sister this is a popular famous YouTube star. This is another fucking pointless troll. I’m out.
Tyler Evans
Just let the thread die. This girl is a popular twitch streamer who’s always posted in other subs. Good try OP. Worked for a while at least.
Carson Watson
Who girl? I wanna jack to her tits
Ryan Rogers
other subs? redditor detected get off my board also yeah OP is a fag honestly
Logan Adams
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