Still, though, I'm finding it a bit hard to believe a German woman from the late '30s freaking out from a modern phone. If her family didn't have one, she must have heard of one. But, it's probably you and I imagining the situation a bit differently. A different sounding bell may actually have startled her. Or maybe it played that bar from Gran Vals. I'd be surprised if a box that started randomly playing digital beeps in different tones didn't surprise anyone from the '30s. Anyway, it's a very minor thing and isn't detracting from my enjoyment of the story. Isn't everyday you get to talk about literature you enjoy with the people who write it.
/wfg/ Writefag General- following Jap laws edition
Jaxon Richardson
Nicholas Brown
the privates are censored
hehehehe
John Campbell
We're you asking for me last thread JD? What's up friend?
Oliver Diaz
i think he meant this alabama
Chase Edwards
nope, excuse me, that would be Nevada. Here is bama
Henry Rogers
Ah... Well that's embarrassing.
Jonathan Harris
Southern Magnolia blossom in her hair is a nice touch.
Jason Gonzalez
very much so
>writing page up and page down, wishing i could draw instead
Brandon Evans
The amount of insanity going on is quite the fun right!
Fuuuuuuuuck, can't wait for the action to begin! The hype is growing.
Nice to see this story continues to be worked on. Its nice that it's different from the other stories that get passed around here.
Very good stuff, JD. A good war story, even as fiction, is an enjoyable read...even if you're writing from the enemy's perspective :p
Jace Fisher
I wish I had artistic talent too. I could never draw much. Have a few friends that are very good. I've heard so long as you keep practicing you will continually improve, like singing.