I NEED HELP!!!

My teacher wrote her response in cursive and I am having trouble reading what it says, could someone please provide a typed transcript of what is written? Thank you very much!

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That's not even cursive loser..

jesus i can only make some words
why the hell would people write like this

Good draft but change the intro.

shitty writing i can try and type some of it
"i appreciate your ? ? and clear vivid ? I really see the journey to the aiport and ? passage that are ? vivid. i once was told by a ? teacher to not begin a story with a character waking up. I think this is good advice and that your car skip ? ? and go into the action or event in the essay. one question i have is whawt is the ? ? in the essay. the airport? the trip? the family ? ? would be ? see ????

can skip over waking and go into the action or event in the essay*

She wants you to not make stories starting with characters waking up. Also, she says that you need to clarify the main event (?).

Thanks you guys, I think I have enough to go off now!

I can't read what's [REDACTED].

I appreciate your [REDACTED] pacing and clear vivid descriptors. I really see the journey to the airport and [REDACTED] passages that are [REDACTED] vivid. I once was told by a [REDACTED] teacher to not begin a story with a character waking up. I think this is good advice and that you can skip over waking and go into the act or event or the essay. One question I have is what is the central [REDACTED] in the essay, the airport? the trip? the [REDACTED] [REDACTED]? this would be [REDACTED] [REDACTED] to clarify in [REDACTED].
Good draft! - Kathryn

I can't read this either. What the fuck? Who writes like this?

"I appreciate your measured pacing and clear vivid descriptions. I really see the journey to the airport and marked passages that are particularly vivid. I once was told by a ??? teacher to not begin a story with a character waking up. I think this is good advice and that you can skip over words(?) and go into the active event in the essay. One question I have is what is the central crux?? thought?? in the essay - the airport? the trip? the family dynamics? This would be ?? to clarify in person. Good draft!"

I did my best, this is some shitty ass cursive though.

Triggered that she said vivid twice

>vivid twice
So did you

>I was once told by a {writing} teacher?
>This would be {awesome} to clarify in person?

Do you agree with my results?

I THINK WE SOLVED THE MYSTERY LADS!

VICTORY TO Jow Forums ONCE AGIAIN!

if this story doesn't turn into baneposting I'll be disappointed

Ill try my best.

I appreciate your ?? pacing and clear vivid descriptions. I really see the journey to the airport and marked(?) passages that are particularly vivid. I once was told by a ? teacher to not begin a story with a character waking up. I think this is good advice and that you can skip over waking and go into the action or event in the essay. One question I have is what is the central ? in the essay. The airport? The trip? The ? "dynamics?" This would an to clarify in the morning.

Good draft! - Kathryn

I appreciate your measured pacing and clear vivid descriptions. I really see the journey to the airport and marked passages that are particularly vivid. I once was told by a lang teacher to not begin a story with a character waking up. I think this is good advice and that you can skip over waking and go into the action or event in the essay. One question I have is what is the central event in the essay - the airport? The trip? The family dynamics? This would be one area to clarify in revision.

Some fuckin illiterate retards on this board

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>illiterate
Not illiterate fucktards man we new r9k robots don't know much cursive as our educashyen as been designed for niggers, they do not teach cursive anymore

this isn't about illiteracy. this woman uses cursive for certain words, then not others, and she doesn't use "proper" cursive as in the assigned movements for letters so she somehow manages to make "particularly" have Ls that look just like Us, whereas the word passages, for instance, has no cursive whatsoever.

best example of her atrocious handwriting above. does not have an N, and is barely even a fucking word.

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for context, that is supposed to say question.

she has MERGED the E and the S, the t isn't cursive for some reason, she then includes a "u", then dots an i? there is no semblance of an "n" at the end and for some reason she has dotted what i assume she meant to be the u.

I write in cursive, this is not cursive, this is fucking garbage

Agreed not the usual seen cursive

I can read cursive and her hand writing is pretty shit. I can make out about half of what she wrote.