New /creativerobot/ thread? Last one died, shamelessly plug stuff you've made, give feedback, and support

Hey user you should try finishing something. You definitely have chops. I'm an amateur writer myself (I've had this or that published in small magazines). I like your writing but the biggest criticism I have is that your language doesn't quite suit the content. I mean that your sentence structure is a bit too calculating for the drunken character using simple brazen speech like motherfucker. The short stammering lines work well by contrast, though. Im not really sure how to offer you advice without line editing, so here I'll just re-write your first few lines to adjust them so you can see what a mean and decide if I'm off-base for yourself.

>It's cold. It's raining. I'm broke, drunk and wet, and I smell drunk and wet. I'd probably smell broke too if I could. My nose is bleeding and my face is bruised, and the worst part is I don't get to say "you should see the other guy". The other guy is fine. I think. I don't remember the what-for but chances are I started it. But it's okay. It's alright. Because right now I'm just stumbling drunk down the street and I can't feel a thing. It'll hurt like a motherfucker in the morning. But I'll worry about that tomorrow. I'll worry about that in the morning.What I need now is my damn car.

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Thanks for actually taking the time to read it, and even more for constructive advice.
To be honest, those two aren't really recent, and re-reading them again as I was posting them, I was thinking the same thing about sentence structure and the drunk character. I got a more recent one where I managed to do that quite well, but I'm afraid it's in Croatian.
That said, I like your edit, it's better than my original. Except for one sentence that puts me off, and I don't even know why
>Because right now I'm just stumbling drunk down the street and I can't feel a thing
Just doesn't sit well with me for some reason, though to be fair, that particular one doesn't really sit too good in the original either.

sure thing man, happy to help. I'm not an authority on anything--if something doesnt sit well with you, you're the author.

Bump, I'm almost done.

yeee bois best threads

soundcloud.com/keanuc

>obtuse rap for the suicidal & homicidal

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bump
gloomanon here, working on another track
shilling comfyradio.blogspot.com--another user's project
>post serial number 78326459

That is a nice track man. Always enjoy cloud rap, but I rap too fast to really mix in with it well. Just can't slow down enough.

Do you make your own beats?

>has artistic talent and the motivation to do something with it
>"""robot"""
no

For those of you who make music, what do you think the best DAW is out there? I'm just kinda interested in sampling and making a few beats. Nothing too crazy though.

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I posted my music in the other threads, but here is some of the story I have been working on to go with the songs.
It's only a little more than a chapter because I've been working on a different story, but I want to continue it. Never shared any of my writing before.

pastebin.com/u/Sol_ace

This is really good.
origignallyererere

I've got some news for you, faggot. Robots who were made here when this board was young; people who were 14 like moot in 2004 when Jow Forums launched, we're all 27 years old and those of us who haven't an-heroed have generally developed creative outlets that we aren't very good at. If I were a good musician I'd be selling albums and posting on /mu/. I'm not, because I am a fucking failure, so these threads are a comfy place to share my projects with other robots who cope by trying to finish something even if they know it will only sit in their bedroom even if they finished it.

If you haven't found a creative coping mechanism to fail at yet, you are probably a youngfag who is still >tfw no prom date mode. That's fine, but understand robots are a decade older than that and we've exhausted greentext as a method of catharsis.

Enjoy the thread or go post in another one

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I like reaper

Uhh i want to make music for games.

Here's my soundcloud. soundcloud.com/onzerc

Im working on a piece now. I really like where it's going. Tell me what you think.

vocaroo.com/i/s1nqYT2NvOvp

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I am using garageband right now to get myself started; it does everything I need it to honestly.
>midi drawing
>sampler
>external audio clip importing
>quantizer
>hundreds of preset instruments
>extensive synthesizers built in
>incredibly user friendly
I'm aware its pleb tier, but I'm not going to drop hundreds of dollars on a license for FL Studio, Reaper, or whatever unless I feel like I am serious about making music and GB literally cannot do what I hear in my head. Until that point, GB is good. If you have a used book/game store around your town, I'd highly recommend going in to poke around the electronics section and find yourself a USB MIDI keyboard. I have an AKAI MPK mini from my local junk store, and it's unreal how much easier/more fun production is with a little keyboard instead of musical typing.
>fits on a plane tray table too

This is my shit:
you can get a sense of what I do with a 60 dollar used AKAI and Garageband. Hope that helps my man

dude thanks!!

Here, I use ableton 10. I like the ease of use.

This is a quality post.
I am Oregonal dude

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First time working with a daw, it's kind of slow and rough but I had fun.

soundcloud.com/blue_jupiter/experimental-track

>serial 899562945

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I made a new song today

m.soundcloud.com/iwilldevouryourkittens/gohr

Hope you like it. Pls gib thoughts n feedback

I kind of get the feeling you guys aren't robots

Your writing has great personality. Don't dumb down your sentence structure like said. I felt like I was listening to a best bud while I was reading it, and the variety in sentence structure keeps it interesting. You were bringing me into your world and I wanted to hear more about it. The first one started on such a bad note that I yearning to hear it go better like usual story lines do.

Obvious ZUN influence, nice stuff bro

Reaper or Audacity.
But I don't actually use my DAW for trap beats or stuff like that. Audacity definitely isn't going to do that well for you. Basically all I need mine to do is layer and edit the recordings I make of my guitar, bass, keyboard, and vocals. MIDI sometimes too, but I have a separate program for that.
I'd say you want Garageband to be honest, like this guy said unless you just pirate or buy Reaper or FL Studio.

Oh hey I know you
You gr8

>m.soundcloud.com/iwilldevouryourkittens/gohr

Good shit.
I liked the use of the guitar for the tone shift.

keep it up!

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Thanks user! I appreciate it so much

ty, Zun is a cool guy. But there are more cooler composers i must imitate, like the dude who did daytona usa.

I made a podcast with my friends once. Im not in it but I edited it. The first episode is horrible, but I thoroughly enjoyed the second and still listen to it sometimes.
youtube.com/watch?v=QNk-8Scdad0

I love it already user! I could listen to it for hours. I'll keep an eye open for the finished version.

what's with the commie imagery? I'll jump to the second episode

like the last stuff you posted, it makes me want to kill myself but in a good way

just pirate it man
asdfasfadssfasdf

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Just nazbol gang shit. We arent really commies.

yeah I do. Part of cloud rap is rapping slower, try doing that

I was booked for my first show today, need to sell 25-30 tickets and have 3 people featuring. I'd love feedback so I know which tracks to use in my 20 minute set.

soundcloud.com/evanbrill/r-u-n

soundcloud.com/evanbrill/12-bit-romantic

soundcloud.com/evanbrill/nothing-to-fear

soundcloud.com/evanbrill/automotive

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All right, I'll post a different video than I usually post. It's really dumb but hopefully funny at certain moments. What do y'all think?

youtube.com/watch?v=pE6pnbwwPRM

youtu.be/sdrbptCTvbA
I posted this here yesterday, but I do these little freehand doodle things, and I made an animation based off of them. Animation is the perfect neet hobby imo because you don't have to leave the house.

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I remember your other video. This was slower at times, but the central joke is still funny. You make good stuff

who wants to read the beginning of an erotica i wrote in a horny daze of a kid slowing becoming a trap whore
>uploading now

soundcloud.com/user-321277560/lethal-injection
>tfw my online friend who wanted to make industrial music with me straight up died
I wish I had friends who made similar music to me. They only produce trap/hip hop.
very chill shoegaze track
pretty cool edgy dark trap
I dig it

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damn that song "hikikomori" is crazy. like actual school shooter music

Thanks really appreciate it, wanted to have a unique sound

Why? The only thing I exaggerate in my lyrics are the sexual references. My drug addiction, hatred for humans, and desire to kill myself and others are all accurately represented. I literally cannot leave my room unless under the influence of sedatives

yeah the misanthropic themes stood out to me.. Fits the thread for sure.

Sorry about your friend.

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but are you virgin my friend?

thanks he was the first to ever give me criticism on Soundcloud and gave me a lot of tips on production. I'm not sure he's dead but he hasn't scrobbled anything on last.fm for half a year, stopped replying online and hasn't uploaded anything either. Last song he listened to was about death or suicide.

here is today's assault on your ears
vocaroo.com/i/s1WpdxqEIwtM

>but are you virgin my friend?
not him but I am. In this song I basically say I jerk off to the Ideal woman and have been unsatisfied romantically for 24 years and counting.
soundcloud.com/user-321277560/hestia-lideal

I just followed you, will try to leave a comment or two by morning

8 years ago I stuck my dick in the drunk scho slut for about 30 seconds before getting grosed out knowing at least 10 other dicks had been in there. Thats it, make of it what you will. At this point I hate women so much I rarely even find them sexually attractive, much prefer traps

a man of my own heart i see

one more going in raw
vocaroo.com/i/s0AcaSIhefDL

it's good man, don't feel forced to comment or follow. I don't want clout. How did you get a prod by The Virus and the antidote?

>tfw you can never finish a track

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Well I always try to go comment for comment at least for artists that I like, your music seems pretty interesting. As for the Virus intrumental I ripped it from sone AMV on youtube and looped it myself, didn't realize till afterwards that it wasn't "free" to use so I'm just hoping no one snitches to him or it they do he won't mind since its being used for nonprofit

Completed some more ships. These were easier since they all had the same hull and overall similar superstructure, as well as mostly the same armaments.
From Bottom to Top, oldest to newest:
-Isokaze class, I actually posted this one yesterday, but decided to include it to show how Japanese destroyers changed.
-Minekaze class first rate destroyer, as completed in 1919. Four 120mm guns and three double torpedo tubes.
-Wakatake class, second rate destroyer, as completed in 1920. Essentially a scaled down Minekaze, three 120mm guns and two double torpedo tubes.
-Kamikaze class, or the Nokaze subclass of the Minekaze class (last 4 ships). Same as Minekaze, but with different main gun arrangement for better arcs of fire.
-Mutsuki class, as completed in 1926. Very similar to the preceding Kamikaze class, but with two triple torpedo tubes instead of three double ones.
-Mutsuki, after a refit in either late 1930s or early 1940s. The triple torpedo tubes have been replaced with the more modern armored tubes, capable of firing the Type 93 (AKA Long Lance) Torpedo. Torpedo lockers have also been installed to carry an additional 6 torpedoes.
-Mutsuki after a major refit in the 1940s. All 120mm guns have been removed, with guns 1 and 4 being replaced with newer 12.7cm/50 dual purpose guns, and guns 2 and 3 being removed to make room for 25mm AA guns. I'm actually not sure about the accuracy of this conversion, I never heard anything about it before some quick research today, but I like the idea so I made it anyway.
Donut Steel pls

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A lot of people don't realize that it can actually be real work and that if you try to force it then you won't have the best possible product. Try not to stress it and let inspiration fuel you when it naturally strikes

very kind of you to say. i've never drawn banette before but i gave it a shot. it got a little lewd...

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haha Ight no snitches here did you try producing yourself too?

No I'm terrible at beat making and am still learning the best way to even record vocals, I do DJ work mostly in the chopped & screwed genre though, there should be a link on my main sc page to it if you like that kind of thing

soundcloud.com/moxifloxi/loud-and-clear
>EDM
>heavy synth
>lewd
>weebshit

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current WIP. Will work on this applying everything i've learned in the past months.

Here's my DA: deviantart.com/zasenpai
critics welcome

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The thing that sucks about playing guitar and being depressed is not having anyone to jam with. The best guitar playing is when you make up stuff with someone else.

BUMP pls no ded

holy fucking shit batman

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elaborate maybe?

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Someome pls reply to me.

sure guy. what ya got goin on

Which one are you, anono?
Damn I went to dinner with mom and this thread died

Good shit user, I liked it a lot

not him, but go to /ic/ and read the sticky. Basic anatomy problems..

Dont think I didnt notice that Sand King sample you cheeky bugger

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I've been writing an Incel/R9K/nice guys inspired web novel. Here's a link to it:

webnovel.com/book/11024862305241405/How-to-Fix-a-Moronic-Incel

>writing a series of short stories called A House of Moths
>set in a future that has stabilized after a world wide catastrophe making 97% of the planet devoid of oxygen
>follows one of the main inheritors to a pharmaceutical company that owns the three cuban islands that exist after the flooding due to the temperature increase from lack of oxygen

I have done a lot of writing and thinking about the setting. I can talk about it at length but honestly writing just feels strange after not doing it for so long. I wrote several novels when I was younger and I just feel like I've lost something.

Gloombro here, rough cut of a new track
what do you fags think it needs?
>vocaroo.com/i/s0vDLyAPZew6

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sketching from time to time, not with any goal in mind just from imagination

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It's not the same, lads. The joy of getting a reply is knowing your stuff stood out enough for someone to say something.

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Fugg originally

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have another
vocaroo.com/i/s0sLMuIToF6I