Can someone critique my music im tired of friends saying its funny and good i feel like they dont really think its...

can someone critique my music im tired of friends saying its funny and good i feel like they dont really think its funny nor good

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015

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I'm sorry, I don't like this fucking lofi mumble shit.

>soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015
It's honestly really fucking bad. The beat is generic, I can't even here your voice. like it's just so fucking bad

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Just play an instrument mate, or at least get good at electronic music

Can't hear your voice at all. The beat is too slow, there are two points where it could speed up with some faster drums/kicks

The sound is pleasing to me, but I don't know jack about music so it could actually be trash. The words being said are kinda weird. I like it tho.

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/slinging-to-minors-deadboi-1?in=colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015 what about this song

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/slinging-to-minors-deadboi-1?in=colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015 heres a up beat

I'm guessing the only part of this that's actually yours is the vocals, right? So I'm only gonna judge that.

You gotta chill the fuck out with the reverb. Yeah, I know, you're new and you think your voice sounds bad so you reverbed the fuck out of it hoping people wouldn't notice. We still can, and now we have to deal with a fuckton of reverb too. You gotta tone that down and do waaaay more attempts at the vocals too. It sounds like you phoned it in. Do a fuckton of vocal takes because it won't be good the first time, second time, or even the fifth time.

yay solid advice how can i be good at vocals while purposely sounding sucky and awkward if u are experienced with making music and shit would u be interested to work with me?

i also used my headphones as the microphone also can u listen to "slinging to minors"

bumping for porn original style

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Song made me cri. I like it though

your singing voice is shit but other than that it's comfy

Your beat is good but your delivery and vocal editing needs work.

im tryna go for this like awkward weird nerd persona but i need help finding where i dont have to explain everytime someone listens would i just have to comeout with an overly well produced music video?

I really like the sound of the last song but I do not know anything about making music. Your voice is a little too kermit the frog sounding on this track though and your lyrics are clearly whack but I think you know this.

Also I think it would help if in the part where you are making machine gun sounds you had some kind of drum machine sound that was similar like in feel the love from the kanye and kid cudi album recently

that's a shemale tranny tgirl right?

What is her name? For science

yeah i was tryna make fun of like suicideboys and ghostmane with the voice and the lyrics are just random shit like dick sucking and money and selling drugs

tell me about my music first

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No she's not a tranny. She's an attentionwhore from Russian imageboards that is currently inactive. She made some fake nudes where she had peenus for laughs and giggles but people took them serious. Talked with her on Skype back in the day. Even camwhored with my gf for her once since we were both drunk.

And also her name is somik chan. Somik is catfish in russian.

is everyone done giving me advice

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She is a tranny dumbass
there's even pics of her pre transition

Yeah just stop making bullshit trendy music. Grow a personality.