Can someone critique my music im tired of friends saying its funny and good i feel like they dont really think its...

can someone critique my music im tired of friends saying its funny and good i feel like they dont really think its funny nor good

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015

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I'm sorry, I don't like this fucking lofi mumble shit.

>soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015
It's honestly really fucking bad. The beat is generic, I can't even here your voice. like it's just so fucking bad

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Just play an instrument mate, or at least get good at electronic music

Can't hear your voice at all. The beat is too slow, there are two points where it could speed up with some faster drums/kicks

The sound is pleasing to me, but I don't know jack about music so it could actually be trash. The words being said are kinda weird. I like it tho.

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/slinging-to-minors-deadboi-1?in=colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015 what about this song

soundcloud.com/colorado-104469524/slinging-to-minors-deadboi-1?in=colorado-104469524/sets/i-wish-it-was-2015 heres a up beat

I'm guessing the only part of this that's actually yours is the vocals, right? So I'm only gonna judge that.

You gotta chill the fuck out with the reverb. Yeah, I know, you're new and you think your voice sounds bad so you reverbed the fuck out of it hoping people wouldn't notice. We still can, and now we have to deal with a fuckton of reverb too. You gotta tone that down and do waaaay more attempts at the vocals too. It sounds like you phoned it in. Do a fuckton of vocal takes because it won't be good the first time, second time, or even the fifth time.

yay solid advice how can i be good at vocals while purposely sounding sucky and awkward if u are experienced with making music and shit would u be interested to work with me?