Are there any other Jow Forums rappers on here? I know there's Chad Marco and a few others

>I dunno even where I'd get beats, or if I'm even ready to solicit them yet

I can provide you decent beats, if you ever decide to rap.

let me dig through my old stuff, i write mostly on german so finding the english stuff could be difficult

vocaroo.com/i/s0upztEUyh6f

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ye yee nigga do you have a soundcloud? this shit's tight af

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this bitch looks so fucking greasy

Thanks but nah Im thinking about making one though

test test yippppe

man i deleted all my shit but i wrote sth new for you

My thoughts are driftin
reminiscin
My Dreams are real, my lifes fiction
Im never alone, overwhelemd by the presence
Of a being i can not comprehend and
the idea of universal trancendence
that i articulate in raps when

i spit bars its all about rhymes and flows
and my words let your mind implode
Im tired so,

Spare me with this crap about money, bitches and fame
I want splifs, my atari and maybe a bit o cocain
Pass me the mic and i unleash a tsunami of rage
Im going insane

Spitting rhymes a like tommy gun
When im on the mic i dont rap, i preach the necronomicon

haha that's g mate, thanks for sharin

your originally welcome man

If there are any rappers that need modern style hip-hop beats hit me up on discord
OC#9808

i have noticed a recent re-kindled interest in natalie lately. personally im happy because ive never stopped liking her, and i was sad when she went away. i think with muffy now gone, agatha gone, crispy gone, we are getting back to our roots now and re-orbiting the classics

I'm gonna go O.D. with the hoes from The O.C.
My throat like a moat with the codeine
You must be blind if you can't see I'm drunk from the shine and I'm dopey
It's like I dive in the wine with no floaty
Feels like I'm floating cause I am a dope fiend
I'm on that slippery slope of the opiates
I know it's so frickin inappropriate
But even if drugs are a rap trope, fuck that and so be it
But I'm all out of hope and can't cope, so I'll hang and dance from that damn rope, so I'm saying goodbye to all my associates

I know how to have pride, but I'm too high to apply it
So I drink and drive and throw cry fits
It's so easy to deny I wanna die, so I suppose I'll overdose on some science
That's slang for pills, the way MJ sang gave me dang chills
So I'll choke on all the propofol like it's my joke for y'all
Here's the phone for the cops to be called, cause I'm so far gone off the wall

I'll post more if anyone cares.

im only 23 but ive been feeling like im 50
yeah i got the texts and the snaps that you sent me
where you been? where you been? that's what she been asking
hikkikomori all my life i'm just waiting for the casket

you look fine every time i see you
bro, just what the fuck had happened?
it's just magic
i'm going ghost and then i vanish

see the money, still can't grab it
know the problems, can't take action
just stay passive
don't need answers, just need options

she sending snaps of herself topless
saved the pics and then i blocked her
she said i saved her but i'm no doctor
i was there, i was right beside her

she found another dick to fit inside her
called her out, she said i'm the monster
this bitch is toxic
had to drop her

pls rate

Your use of words that kinda rhyme was creative, but most of the lines are too short and not all of them rhyme. Also you only rhyme the last words.

Natalie isn't a classic. Boxxy and rose are classics.

all these talented bots but no soundcloud links
wtf guys!?

Thanks for kissing my ass. I have tried writing to an instrumental and it feels 1000 times harder. I just write long paragraphs whenever I'm in the mood, not trying to be super good, just whatever comes to mind. I'll post a big one.

Yeah I'm a rapper.
I'm depressed, I have dreadlocks... every single dreadlock is a different colour, I mumble like I've been drinking since 9am and have delusions of grandeur.
I also but "iffy" and other non-words on the end of non- words so that they "rhyme"... kinda.

I'm so bi-zarre, I'm high as trees are
I wanna see a Korean sleep with feet apart, I'll try VR
If there was any point to this, I wouldn't need so many appointments
Cause I swing this mic like a sword, end up high out my gord
And stored in a psychiatric ward I can't likely afford
Non whites excite, I adore mi pretty amor
Til they zip right past 54, then they're a sight that is sore
If they wear no makeup at night, I ignore and I fight for divorce
I'm just a talking head with sick thoughts locked in a shed
When rent surpassed what I had, I was left aghast
and turned to crack like my addiction to ass
I busk on the streets singing Elon Musk tweets and sucking skeet from corrupt police
Seeing the obscene things in Vancouver, I would've sang sooner
But since I was a hermit and never heard of it, they observed I had no permit
and the verdict put me in the back of a dang cruiser
Instead of spending my days offending anyone with vajayjays and watching
two girls with a poo cup, it was time I grew up
So I replaced Nintendos with in your face sexual innuendos
But I got pepper sprayed by a pestered babe
I was gonna relent with the rest of my rage, til she raised a pen aimed at my neck at the nape

(1/2)

>but most of the lines are too short and not all of them rhyme.
they're the appropriate length for the beat i made with to go it lol that's not a problem. also what are slant rhymes anyway?

>Also you only rhyme the last words.
>i'm supposed to have hundreds of multi-syllabic basic bitch mushmouth garbage in between end rhymes
yeah nah. thanks though. you tried at least.

Leave the disrespectful bitch as an indiscriminate little speck on the ground
Expelling a tec with infinite rounds, gritting my teeth like I'm emitting shit mounds
I'm irate that no fly dame will date me, as pissed off as when my laser disc came with a late fee
It's probably because of my knobby knees that I ain't vape lately
But without chronic distilled to calm the stillness, I'm made aware of my chronic illness
Smoking stacks for my broken back, the kids kid me when they say "Isn't he the equivalent of a chimney?"
You must not have been listening, cause when I'm out of weed, I'm left sneezing and sniffling
Putting Pop Tarts in the shopping cart, wish I could have the gooey slop part a la carte
Cause even the slightest trace of grain puts my whole face in pain
Even thinking of whipped topping causes weight gain, so pop the champagne
I get so fat from the Baskins, I full on snap at the Atkins
When it comes to counting points, there's no point in tryna teach me
I already got type 3 diabetes, I'm so sly and sneaky
If you give me a bowl of rye Wheaties, I'll call the U.N. to sign a peace treaty, I've already had a Piza of pizza if you count this piece that I'm eating

I'm glad you noticed me!

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Your post reeks of passive aggression

you're perceptive. i make my own beats and write to them so i know what i'm doing my man that's all i'm saying. your long ass paragraphs of random mushmouth shit i guarantee can't be properly laid down on a track without sounding awkward as shit or way off beat NIGGER

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I already said I don't write to beats.

then you're more into poetry or some shit then. if you don't write to beats or at least rap to yourself on a random beat with shit your wrote then idk what you're doing in this thread

I've (successfully) written to 2 beats before, the rest of the time I turn on different beats and can't think of anything so I give up. Without hearing anyone else' opinions of rhyme ability, I could potentially be wasting my time if it turned out no one thought I had any skill, even though I am only interested in short bursts anyways.

i am known as lil tendies

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I try to stick to the /creative/ thread since it usually pops up at the same time I put something new out, but I guess I can pop in here.

I do kind of like mellow / introspective rap i guess? never really quantified it, but that seems to be what people describe it as. I just write what I feel at the time.

Just put this up today, but the vocals were shit so I remade it and its a little better.
soundcloud.com/the_myth_of_ken/message-in-the-wind

If you just want to see the lyrics I put all of my released songs on Genius as well.
genius.com/artists/The-myth-of-ken

This turned out much worse than anticipated:

Listen, I hate normies but care an awful lot
about conforming, made sure my hair was tall and taut
New wardrobe, peep all the Aeropostale bought
if I looked cool, would people accost a bot?
I gave pause and thought probably not
the ship has sailed, this tale's all for naught
my energy's spent, let it turn stale and rot
from a pale ale's the only time I'll take a shot
as I bitch that every breathing female's a thot

I've lowered my standards from Kate Moss
to Kate Gosselin post-eight offspring
I date goblins with diets by Cake Boss,
who hate flossing and conflate spending a date walking
with mocking her weight problem, it's like rape talk
Great Scott, even my sour grapes get ate often
and I don't even finger her V, like the late Spock

>the rest of the time I turn on different beats and can't think of anything so I give up.
find beats that suit the type of mood you're in. it's easier to write that way. find your inspiration in the beat and rhythm, write bars that fit to the beat's melody and so on. or, download ableton or FL studio and fuck around making some beats that you'd be able to write to. writing long paragraphs without counting the syllables or hearing a beat will make your music sound wonky and awkward. like i tried rapping what you wrote to a random beat and it just didn't go well at all. you can definitely rhyme but there's more than just rhyming. you have to actually rap it out loud, have an appropriate delivery, know and be confident with your "rap voice" etc. i'm not trying to shit on you and i know i'm coming at you aggressively (just smoked a few bowls) but take your shit to the next level and learn the process my man. you'll get better and know what you're doing even more.

Alright, thanks a lot for the advice.

How did u record ur voice my negro

You sound like a nerd n underage

thanks im 20

If you know what I'm talking about, when you rap over a popular beat, are you supposed to imitate the flow of the original artist? It seems like how they are talking over the beat is the only way it would make sense.

I used to feel that way too. I like to start out writing a verse in their flow, and then alter the flow. Then once you've changed it up a bit, start your second verse with that new flow.

Took a bit of practice for me, but eventually it made sense and I was able to look past "the default flow" that the first person you hear does.

I rap to myself every once in a while or inside my head when I hear a beat.

It's more verbal practice and creative practice more than anything.

I know I'm not the only loser that does this.

sorry for the aggression famalam.
>when you rap over a popular beat, are you supposed to imitate the flow of the original artist?
i did that when i was first starting out and practicing flows and delivery yeah. for example, that Mos Def track Travelling Man i wrote and rapped over and completely took his flow and style and had fun with it because i didn't know any other way it would sound good without his flow. but you don't /have/ to imitate their flow and rhyming schemes really. one thing that always helped me was freestyling off the top of my head on beats. since it's off the cuff, you're kind of forced to slow down your flow to what's natural to you if that makes sense.

tldr for practice, imitate popular rapper's flow. it actually really helps. but ofc with practice you won't even want to use their flow and you'll incorporate your own.

I do that, then never write down anything I think of and thus don't have any lyrics to improve upon.

I wrote a couple lines to Pound Cake - can you tell me if I'm on the right track?

youtube.com/watch?v=TOdwMx9jHFs

Started off without a whole lot to say
Most of my thoughts were just bottled up and locked away
I called a whole lot of thots to pay, cause I was just an awkward bot from Jow Forums
Popping bottles just tryna stop the pain, but like a chocolate stain, it wouldn't wash away
Began visiting psychiatrists, who would go "come on, get high off this"
I'd take like 5 or 6, til the wanting suicide would lift
These are the kinds of escapes we plant inside the minds of kids

yikes. if the way i'm rapping it is right, those are some good fucking bars and great flow. you're on the right path and further than you think dude just keep fucking doing that. no lie good shit and great beat choice.

look up type beats too if you want. "drake type beat" or "xxxtentacion type beat" etc so you don't have to feel pressured matching the flow to the original too.

can I get some feedback on this before the thread dies?

Thank you for the feedback, it makes me want to keep going, especially since the beat helps provide structure for ideas to come.

it's dope
keep writing my man you have talent in those rhymes