Blarod here. Post whatever it is you've made and I'll try and give feedback.
I made a new song, it's very ambient and creepy. It's going along with a story I'm writing, about a guy who makes music for snuff films. Feedback of any kind is appreciated.
i use magix music maker, igot with a humble bundle sometime ago
Jacob Hall
Use Propellerhead's Reason. Anything else is amateur or a plugin. Fruity is good for mastering, magix.. for kids. Reason has a massive soundbank repository which allows for professional use. I'm not going to lie - those songs are lowest tier, and shouldn't be used for a movie.
Eli Hernandez
i have no plans of really using the songs for anything, i started making music to stop cutting, magix works for me even if its just samples, still thank you!
Jayden Price
Cutting what?
Benjamin Wright
myself... im not a girl btw so its a bigger red flag!
Joseph Adams
In this case you should really try Reason. Since you'll be able to do much more than just copy/paste samples, you'll soon get immersed into composing.
Landon Cook
i don't see what its all about tho, i make like 40 sec songs that distract me from cutting, it works for me, i understand it and i feel ok using it now if i were to change what i used i would have to learn how to use it, stress about not understanding what im doing then got back to step one, im weak minded and i know ill fail before i even try...still, thank you!
Jaxon Rodriguez
Sorry if this is too personal of a question user, but why do you cut? I never saw the appeal. Is it to deal with depersonalization?
Michael Gomez
if im going to be real here, i hate myself and think i should be in pain, also a few mental problems that never have been dealt with (early childhood trauma is amazing) so now i cut make myself in pain, hopes that ill die even tho i know it will almost never kill me
Angel Long
I see. I'm sorry you feel like that user. Normie question but have you tried medication.
If music helps keep doing it.
Landon White
ive been on ssris for years nothing helps i dont trust people enough for any therapy, music more or less stops me for a bit. i dont mean to bum you out sorry about that
Julian Perry
It's okay user. I hope you end up doing okay.
Levi Morales
OP, which software do you use?
Noah Bell
I posted my art here last time, now it's time for writing. I'm working on pieces of it at a time. No real flow yet, just little non-linear parts so far. My writing is nothing special, and I have a heavy focus on dialogue. Never written anything before.
My story is heavily based on the shitshow that is Channel Awesome, and their downfall. Most of the key people are the same except I have a PR manager in my story who is based on Malcolm Tucker from The Thick of It. The story is about him, and the tard wrangling that goes on behind the scenes to keep the website up. In this scene, Louis is dealing with the aftermath of trolls finding his old accounts on sex forums where he typed smut about sucking black cock.
For this song though I used my guitar and my reverb pedals.
Nathan Martinez
That's pretty funny. I'd probably read more.
Michael Lewis
why not ableton
Adam Smith
I wanted something obscure, yet better than FL. A lot of people use ableton and I didn't like the preset patches on them compared to reason. I really like Reason now.
Joseph Johnson
I'm going to try and do something where Pete starts off as an unassuming pushover, and gradually have the others push his buttons until he snaps and understands that berating these people is the only way to get them to behave.
This scene is a comparison. For background, Pete has immediate friction with Noah, who hates the idea of having his content moderated. Later he steals Pete's journal, which has details about failed creative aspirations and shitty drawings. Pete wanted to be a creative at one time, but decided to work for creatives instead because he has no talent. Just like in real life, Noah has shit going on with an unfulfilled promise to make a movie.
I posted a few weeks ago in one of these threads a book series I wrote for TES that I was working on making a quest out of. An early part of the quest has the player encounter a secluded Forsworn village, hidden high in the Druadach Mountains. There's a bard there, and he has a ballad he sings of his people and their struggle. Here it is. >There is a land, so fair it stands, >The Emerald of the North >From the mossy peat and rocky wold >Came the Reachmen boldly forth >Though many have claimed to be our Lord, >We are our own to rule >To us alone, these hills belong >not to Cyrod, Mer nor Nord
>Foul Olaf, he did take our land, >with Atmoran hordes so cruel >And Hestra of Alessia, >took it from him in turn >Though good King Faolan drove them back, >Though they felt his mighty burn >Not long to for, we were slaves again >under a foreign lord >From Reman-Drear, to Akavir >It mattered not to us >We yearned instead for that distant year >When the Reach was ours to roam
>But then came trickster Durcorach, >Cunning as a fox >In Interregnum, with his marching drum, >Conquered all from docks to docks >Though his arrogance and appetence >Saw death by foreign hand, >Even under Leovic >The Reachmen ruled their land
>Yet after many centuries, >Twas stolen from us in shame >By infernal Tyrant Septim, >then the one called Stormcloak same >But even now, in our hearts, >Burns fair Faolan's flame >And yet again, come our stand, >will the Reachmen rule their land >And yet again, come their blood >will the Reachmen rule our land I imagine it as sounding something like this: youtube.com/watch?v=rDzvphtF9YI
Just keep writing. Doesn't matter how trash you think it is. Don't be afraid to go back and edit things, but don't get caught up doing that either. You might be surprised by how good it turns out.
I think a big problem is that you make these threads right as americans are going to bed, and when western europas are still asleep / just waking up. Big american presence here. I think some people don't like shilling as often as these threads pop up, so they don't post their stuff every thread so you see a varying userbase in these threads.
Connor Hall
Aye bois I'm very productive still I didn't use it all up saturday I got like 6 tracks in the works (one of which I made the beat for!) Whatever
+1 for lmms and audacity. Recently switched to ableton though as I got a great discount during black friday. liking it a lot more but it is a bit more difficult to learn
Like other dude said just keep writing and keep your bad shit around. Whenever you feel writer's block go back to the bad shit and try to fix it up. I used to throw away everything I did whether it was poetry, stories, songs, beats. All got trashed. It doesn't help you much if you don't learn from it.
And if writing ability isn't your problem then just stop writing for a bit and come back. Figure out a routine that keeps you writing for as long as possible.
Interesting. Are you going to keep it as text or eventually find someone to record it?
You have a good comedic style. Just make sure it doesn't rely too much on absurdity for its comedy or it will get old quick. Your second post is a little less humorous, but it definitely has a great feel to the dialogue. Good mix of tv-speak and realism.
>Are you going to keep it as text or eventually find someone to record it? Hopefully I'll actually see the project through and all the characters (3 major, 7 minor) will be voiced. There are amateur actors in the skyrim mod community who lend their voices to projects for free, and I've already reached out to a few of them with sample lines. So the bard would probably be voiced by one of those if I can find one who's decent at singing. Doesn't have to be amazing or anything. I recorded my own version a little while ago but I'm shit at singing, have terrible recording equipment and also had a cold, so it came out pretty bad. vocaroo.com/i/basedfoOH65u7u
>tfw tried to do standup once >I am a fat guy >came up with an act where I carried a scale out on stage then would speak about how stand up burns calories and run around the stage like one of those 'high energy observational comedians' and would weight myself every few minutes and talk about how I was losing weight live on stage >went to an open mic to do the routine >walked out on stage with my scales >someone shouts 'A NEW HEAVIEST CATCH FIRST PRIZE' >makes me really nervous >try to do the act >start running on the stage >slip and fall over, hurt my ankle >have to leave because it hurts
what made you even want to do standup? Never got the appeal. Either going to shows or doing them. Then again I don't find most "jokes" funny anyway.
Nathan Watson
Interesting. The genre (i guess?) is a bit different from most creators in these threads, but I bet there would be someone here that could do it if you could catch their eye or something.
Definitely try to get it voiced.
Adam Myers
Any of you fags have any recommendations for shit to do while seated at the piano? Being a beginner without direction, all I know how to do is practice scales and arpeggios or practice a piece of music that I like. Doesn't seem like it's very good for getting gud.
The VO will be pretty much the last thing I finish. I'm still writing the script and working on building the environments right now, so the end isn't even in sight right now. But I'll certainly put out a call in one of these threads if they're still around when I'm ready.
People love self-deprecating comedy, user. I don't watch amateur standup myself, but I'm willing to bet that a significant portion of your audience are there to make them feel better about themselves. If you can embrace that, I'm sure you can do well. But I can't imagine genuinely not letting it get under your skin.
Camden Sanders
Find a piece that's harder than what you can currently do and master it. That's the best way to get better.
Jordan Campbell
>hurt my ankle >hard to do stand up Consider relying on crutches then.
Chase Anderson
Right. Should I force myself to look at the sheet music while playing? Currently I just use it as a reference, looking at it while learning a part and then relying on memory to play it then on. I'm not sure if that's how I should go about it.
Christopher Mitchell
This is really impressive, do you have any more recent renders?
Michael Williams
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The song hypes you up but never delivers. I know I'm supposed to focus on the singing but it's hard when the song sounds like there's about to be a drop. That's just my take. "Playedthefooldemo" is really good though.
Ian Wood
I think I will just lurk most of these threads. I cannot produce new works fast enough to post anything new. Does anybody here share my sentiments?
Camden Sanders
>Does anybody here share my sentiments? Yeah. Usually I just post something I haven't finished or shared under a name yet.
Jordan Gutierrez
>that bass It won't make me do a poo will it? Neat piano.
I share this feel. It's fun to experience robots' new work but everyone seems so much more efficient at producing stuff.
Liam Jackson
I just made a camouflage pattern. Think Jow Forums would like this?
I probably wont even post anything new for a few weeks, but I now have a job.
Eli Jones
>It won't make me do a poo will it? hopefully
>everyone seems so much more efficient at producing stuff. can relate. i try to tell myself everyone's at least a bit insecure about their music and post it anyway.