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I didn't, that sounds really cool. I love metalworking and stuff.

Nah my shit sucks too much man. I got roasted on prod, I think I'll wait

here's a sad lullabye song i'm working on. the lyrics are going to change
>vocaroo.com/i/s1OEtbWBp9EF
i think i'm improving as a songwriter, but it's hard to tell

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I guess its called a puko not a pucko. He posted this one and said its one of his early designs and I forgot I saved it.

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The only way you'll be able to improve is to just keep doing it! I won't roast you if you want to pm me your stuff on soundcloud

soundcloud.com/user-262160346/sets/endless-always

I like it user, you've got some skill. The lyrics are good, they make me sad. I hope this doesn't come off as rude, but I think you should take some voice lessons, as you have potential as a singer.

I post this little short in every thread only because I see them so often and I want to build up views.
youtu.be/oUnPlrfYlAA

However, that's not what I'd like critique on (though feel free to). I'm doing one of these little shorts every month, and I'm in pre-production on my next one. I'd like someone to look over the script, and tell me what I should fix or change.
drive.google.com/file/d/1J5nJi8qNAa4yA_xiAxlemulykgd1tsth/view?usp=drivesdk

Honestly, it's too short to really have anything meaningful to say about it, but regardless I'd like a little feedback.

aw thanks user! how do you like the melody?
>voice lessons
haha you're probably right. i think this song was just a bit too high pitched for me

>maybe if I post my music on r9k every day, it'll eventually be good

I don't see you posting anything you fucking faggot

I like the melody a lot, it's very "Red House Painters"

I released a new album today. It's some pretty chill stuff.

seanhc.bandcamp.com/album/nice-sounds

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I like it, everything is really well mastered. I also really like the aesthetic you're going for. Pretty comfy stuff user. Good job.

You have a lot of albums, have you ever played a live show?

thanks; its honestly the polar opposite of my usual edgy/experimental stuff. I figured it'd be worth trying something more straightforward for once.

I'm just a bedroom producer, so no, I haven't.

Bedroom producers can play live shows if they put themselves out there.

soundcloud.com/thestoryofthewhos/lament-for-trielle-shortened

I draw and write music for my autistic childhood story I used to imagine. I am shit at drawing, I just do it to get the images in my head out on paper. The music, I don't know. The song I posted is for the death of the main character's wife. I imagined this when I was 20 or 21, I was away for thanksgiving and some stuff happened and the story was catharsis a lot of times for me so it made sense for her to die in battle. her husband was already dead, killing him off was the worst mistake I ever made. The story is basically a huge sci-fi war between "whos" and "lice" I've been imagining ever since I was in 2nd grade. The whos were the good guys, the lice were the bad guys. I imagined trees as enormous cities, rocks as huge mountain fortresses, the school as a massive louse fortress, like the Death Star but not in space. I had Peter and Emily Green as the main characters until middle school when they died and their son Orion became main character. He did everything in the story. The woman the song is for, Trielle, was his wife. She died fighting to destroy a skygun (giant artillery piece I imagined radio towers as) that would have destroyed the whos' home city, a 20-mile-tall tree called Sarengarth, if it had been brought to operation. She got pinned down in an alcove defending the explosive charges they set and was shot over and over but killed a dozen lice. Then Myron, Orion's mentor, carried her out to the trenches where she bled to death. The next day I was on a train and the gray pre-winter sky and buildings were grim, I was listening to Turn It Down ANO remix and the lyrics fit the mindset Myron must have of heading home with another friend dead and gone. When I got home I wrote that piece. I wonder if it's worth getting Ableton, I've used it before and like it but it's expensive, even the 99 dollar version. I ended up ruining the story too.

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>soundcloud.com/thestoryofthewhos/lament-for-trielle-shortened

Sorry for the late reply user. I really like the piece, and the story behind it. You should get ableton. Thank you for always contributing to my threads.

I really really like the part when the guitar kicks in, did you play that yourself? You have some skill, and I think you should invest in ableton and make some more good music.

how do i git gud user?

Been working on this one for months, coming back to it every couple of weeks and tweaking small things and not making it better in any discernible way. Still not entirely happy with it but I think it's time to give up on this one.

clyp.it/kwb0yvoq

You need to sound a bit more confident and project your voice more. I can't really give you specific advice because I'm not a very good singer myself but your voice is pretty good, it just sounds a little wavery and weak, almost like you're unsure of it in a way.
The song is preddy nice.

Are you literally autistic or juts Jow Forums autistic?