Hey there anons welcome to another creative general
Post your creations here and I'll tell you what I think of them.
Here's a new EP I just finished, it's part of a collaboration with a Canadian artist. I accidentally made it all one track in Audacity, but I'm planning on fixing that soon. Let me know what you think.
I'll post my soubdcloud again. It's just music I make for my autistic childhood story I used to imagine. When I was 7 I'd imagine huge space battles at recess with twigs and sticks, except the trees were cities and the school was the huge enemy fortress. I had main characters who eventually had a son Orion who became the main character after they died, and he was main character from when I was age 12 to age 19, at which point he died fighting the villain in a knife duel, pushing them both into a pit of energy after sabotaging their superweapon to kill millions of enemy troops. Anyway his wife Trielle lived on after his death and she raised his children. She ended up dying too, holding off dozens of enemy soldiers, being shot a half dozen times, in a battle to destroy a massive artillery gun. Anyway this was after some sad things happened to me irl, so the feels of her death was mixed with those feels, and I was riding the train the next day and looking out at the gray sky and imagining her friend mourning her death, and was inspired to write this piece. Anyway I ended up ruining the story because I regretted Orions death and had him resurrected by his children using an ancient nanotech device that an entire arc of the story was dedicated to finding but it felt hacky and now I don't imagine it anymore.
Alright, so I'm gonna be using my phone to shoot a little short tomorrow evening. I'd thought I had everything fucking prepared, but then the Gimbal I was using to make it a little more smooth decides it wants to fucking fight my phone for balance resulting in this terrible image jitter every three seconds. The shots are perfectly smooth despite that, but I can't just let something like that slide.
I'd had a backup plan in the form of my Gorillapod, but damn that's upsetting nonetheless.
I'm also gonna be using a voice recorder for some slightly better audio, which hopefully works out okay.
Matthew Miller
your a creative thread OG respect get working on new material
clyp.it/lvi4l2km This is what I have so far of my latest piece. It's hard to motivate myself to work on it since I don't really imagine the story anymore. Orion was the main character for years. It's hard to explain how important this was. It was like he was an alter ego I could slip into. When I was sitting in the car in the parking lot or going into the mall with my mother as a child, or doing something at school or on a trip somewhere, I would imagine parts of my life as his adventures. But since his parents had been main characters for 5 years I decided it was "time" for him to die since he had been for 7, so he died sabotaging a synthetic plague superweapon then killed the main villain in a duel by sacrificing both of them. Then I didn't like his children as much, so I had a whole resurrection quest. It was cool, but once he was back, it felt like death had no weight, and what was stopping me from resurrecting everyone else who had died? Or just undoing whatever I wanted? it was like turning on cheat-codes in a game, and there's no undoing it: it "happened" and it's permanently tainted. I had a short storyline with Orion last year, I tried having this timeskip into the future thinking it would make me feel better. Instead I just wish he had never died in the first place and now with him and his kids there are too many characters, there is no main character, there is no alter ego, there is no "me." I thought his son (Leo) would be a suitable replacement but I did not feel the same connection to him, I felt more to his sister who was a good character but she cannot be a replacement for Orion.
I know I sound severely schizo/autistic but this really mattered to me. I felt like such a fuck-up ruining it, but I guess all good things must come to an end. Maybe I'll go back to it someday. Of all my regrets: fucking up school, fucking up getting a good job, fucking up with qts, I feel like this is even worse.
not gonna ready ur essay bro but i skimmed thru it and sounds like ur invested in this all the best wish I could write a story and be this passionate about it
Joshua Powell
Thanks man. Hopefully I will fix it one day, I just don't know how.
swiss german shitty rap song about my frens hanging out over at my place
Isaiah Carter
that was actually really good did you speak english at some points I defo heard fresh at one point but yeah sounds very fresh like living room rap can imagine u sitting infront of a TV rapping about something
this is me id be interested to hear what you'd say about my music its very different so if u cba no worries keep doing what ur doing
Nolan Jenkins
thank you. and yes some english words in there. also it was recorded this way, me sitting in my living room rapping into my pc headset infront of the tv.
Samuel Flores
nice man the beat was on point too and your voice blended with the instrumental perfectly, first time rapping?
Juan Foster
I have some other raps recorded over the years, but I maybe get the urge to rap something every year, so a little bit experience but not much.