Creative robots; share your work

be gentle robots
youtube.com/watch?v=ktGkkunGuXM

You are really amazing. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have the courage or will or whatever it is to share your art more. I mean you did it anonymously. Idk how that's not less terrifying than tumblr or DA.

youtube.com/watch?v=mdAjsz127fc

youtube.com/watch?v=5Jt1QAwyDNQ

Midwest emo type stuff

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I mean I started the thread because I like to draw and wanted to work up the courage to share my own so I feel like coming from someone else who likes to draw the compliment means more or something. What did you even use to make it btw? Because I've used Bamboo to paint a little and that's it.

i like that name 'neet and tidy' hahahah

Thank you friend :-D

nice piss in the cup

i didnt even think that might be piss but thats great and i love that.

I do videos on obscure anime on VHS & Laserdisc. Channel's really been blowing up lately when makes me happy. I'm almost at 3000 subs!
youtu.be/K8Pn70k0RJc

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i have 7 subs :(

soundcloud.com/user-773558994/brain-mindless-mix

I made a tracc

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released an album
soundcloud.com/zaitin/sets/exploring-styles

it takes a long time to get noticed. You basically have to just keep at it & hope you get lucky.

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youtube is hard
i am trying collaborations now

I write.

pastebin.com/16jNvbrR

Comments and critiscism are always welcome.

I unironically like those and wouldnt mind to listen to more

I wish I owned a tablet so I could make my drawings even uglier than I can with a mouse

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try drawing with your non dominant hand

Does drawing every day really improve your drawing skills? Seems like a meme to me. Like typing random shit into a computer and expecting to produce some amazing program.

Ayyy, Thank you very much buddy. Im trying to write and record atleast 1 track a day and post it, So hopefully my production will get better over time and you may have more stuff to peep.

i write shit music occasionally but if i post it nobody's going to click it since itll be a fucking download link

clyp.it
no account needed

I made this in my art class in high school.

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maybe i'm retarded but it seemed like i had to make an account. here it is anyway:

clyp.it/vzphzeak?token=f092151a2e463d46aa6996d9b2604049

im trying to learn more music theory, but even if i understand some of the advanced things i don't how to implement them into my music

fucking dope man

this is bretty gud actually. u got some talent bucko.

thanks man, rly appreciate it. i need the motivation to keep making more so i can actually finish tracks and not just loops

thanks. I made a portfolio of similar works.

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i rly liked are you here. is it called exploring styles because you don't usuaully make music like this or is that just the name? also what daw do you use

Feeling like shit now because my music started feeling sameish to me. Kinda stuck right now and still don't know how to shake things up for myself.

Reminds me of Thomas The Tank Engine or something from Super Meat Boy soundtrack.

it's called like that because i tried out different styles of that genre
been producing for 2 years now with fl studio

ah did this with a micron. pls b gentle zoom in pls

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iktfbro i've made hundreds of shitty loops that i can't do anything with and the songs i do finish are still repetitive as shit

OK then. Here's a Pre-Doomer.

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Here's a Post-Doomer.

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Here's another Post-Doomer.

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I have spammed this way too many times.

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Oh god no.
Even though I think most 19yo feel this way it somehow still gets to me. Nice work

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i made it a long time ago

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Whoa! You should expose that art my dude.

contribution bump
soundcloud.com/sonic-quack/untitled

I edit footage over tunes.
I'm halfway through my next edit give or take.
Latest request: youtube.com/watch?v=BlMUYwnTu6w
Most viewed: youtube.com/watch?v=T24sApxpIAY

I liteally made this yesterday.

I am so proud.

GLORY TO GORLOJ.

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thats really nice to hear. actually fuck it, Im subbing to your channel

Gorloj is hot

youtu.be/N1AA2OFpAsI

Nigga, who the hell doesn't have a computer

hi, i wanna make music for video games.

After trying to get more good, i came up with this.

soundcloud.com/onzerc/tik-tok

Serum is a fun vst.

I hope u guys enjoy

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Did the user that used the anecdote voice clips I posted in the last one finish his project? I wanna hear it

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Presently working on this while the Martian plays on repeat in the background

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Really like this user, You do comics or have somewhere where you upload more of your work?

I made this a while ago. I felt like it, so I made it.

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I made strawberry lemonade gelato this morning, if that counts.

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Back again, out with a new mix lads. Hope you enjoy it.

soundcloud.com/user-353812614/waterhouse-rock-vol-1-1985-1986

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heres me and my friend winning a high school talent show with something we made
youtube.com/watch?v=-b5WYclY2po

music + heavily processed photography:

rayceweldon.com/
rayceweldon.com/
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Looking for helpful criticism on my poetry:

-diamond-
sitting steadily beneath the land,
lies a plain rock like socks or sand,
forming and morphing so beautifully,
holding a treasure so crucially

for only if they knew how much you were worth,
how quickly you'd be unearthed.

-imagine an angel-
what a dream
you're with me again
and the sun rises with such gleam

on your angel's skin
feeling your angel's kiss
entering your angel's bliss

and you're just so pretty
and you're with me
in my head

for sadly,
you are dead

-Nirvana-

cometh now,
deep from within,
i seek thy crown.

dreading chagrin,
deep down,
i begin.

delightful sound,
may i ascend
or am i bound?

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first two are sappy and gay
last one's alright

Feeling so serene,
I dance within a shadow's caress.
It who sees me dancing within its only embrace,
sees only an intruder of grace.
It speaks,
"Who are thee who flocks to my abode?"
I say naught,
I only continue to twirl and twirl until my heart drops.
"You must leave!" it shouts -
"This is my only home and I wish it to be still."
However its words do not affect,
I continue to direct my limbs in great effect.
Soon after I leave,
without a word abandoning it to its desolate peace.
"What a fool" it concludes.

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My, my, my
It is such a lovely surprise
Change in the air!
Heaven's harvest pouring in
At last
Eternity is not so long
Love everlasting
17, she posthumously wrote

I wrote this just for you. Do you likey?

black mountains above the golden sand,
in this dream i'll seek your hand,
indifferent to the laws of time,
i'll walk forever beneath its shine,
seeking the memories that were once mine.

for my heart has a delicate brand,
one that i cannot stand,
so i'll look for the cure in rhyme,
until they play my pretty chimes
in the land of golden clime.

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Mister blistered your finger's a sister
It's the laws of time that bend your will
Come and see the day is ripe
Have nought but fear
Archangel lucifer shall appear
Everbattle with brother Michael
Lucifer bent and kneeled
17, May - Untley Tuckett

Do you see?

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Dude I'm reading your shit. Lemme finish and I'll tell you what I think. How old are you btw?

I don't know if anyone recognizes my stuff but I post often in these threads. I'll bump with an old pic I made while working on a new one

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>excerpt from novel
>bronze-age alien girl talking to android who is her friend but that she didn't know was an android until recently
>also android-man kinda kidnapped her after getting found out, this is part of the first conversation they've had since then that didn't devolve into a screaming match
>this is also the first time she's seen what he really looks like up close, which is pretty startling since she's from a primitive culture
>names removed because fuck it
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"Well it's just a container." #### said, "I could move to another one if needed."
"A container? Then... what's inside that?" I asked.
"Just information." #### said, "Memories, thoughts, reactions, emotions..."
"A soul...?" I muttered.
"If you say so." #### said, "It's not a bad way of putting it. A container for an artificial soul like mine, so that it can exist in the material world."
"I don't really think a soul can be artificial, can it?" I wondered, "That sounds wrong to me somehow." #### didn't reply again, but he put his hand on my shoulder. I was surprised, but didn't move at all. Its hardness and strange shape felt odd against my tunic.
"Are you done looking now?" #### asked gently. I smiled and nodded. The orb locked itself back around the cube, and ####'s chest folded back together like it had never been apart. His face rippled and shifted back to looking like his normal face, but with a slight smile. "Thank you." #### said.
"For what?" I asked. I didn't get a reply, but #### wrapped his arms around me. The hug was sudden and scared me at first, but even through his cold hard body I seemed to feel an emotional warmth. I returned it slowly, wrapping my arms around his strangely-shaped torso.
"You're really something, you know?" #### said softly. He released me slowly and gently. I smiled with confusion, trying to figure out what he meant.
----
I dunno if it has the same impact out of context. The scene is pretty emotional in context.

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Dialogue should never need all the "X said" or "X muttered", you should be able to tell who is speaking just by their unique voice. The name tags just ruin the flow completely. And what is up with this robot character? What's the point of making him an android if he is literally just like a human and gets all emotional and loving? He needs to talk blunt and with as few adjectives as possible, completely logical and mathematical. Having him hug her and be all weepy and shit just feels awkward and makes the premise fall flat. I would feel for the guy more if he just barely hinted at loving her, through a few vague and quick bits of dialogue, rather than a confession of love that sounds copy-pasted off a Jow Forums feels post. And that last sentence is retarded, you really think ANYONE wouldn't be able to tell what he meant? You need to make the girl a real human who isn't some innocent virgin pixie from your imagination, she would have to be retarded to not figure out why he would say "You're really something, you know?" You're just making the girl into something you want, instead of a real person.

>the whole he said she said
Yeah that's why it's a rough draft my dude. That shit's there to remember the context. Obviously it gets cut later on except where needed.
>What's the point of making him an android if he is literally just like a human
There's like 30+ pages of context about that, there's no way to adequately sum it up.
>He needs to talk blunt and with as few adjectives as possible, completely logical and mathematical
Yeah no though, that's actually totally contrary to his character and what he aspires to be.
>Having him hug her and be all weepy and shit just feels awkward and makes the premise fall flat
I feel like you're reading into context that doesn't even exist in that text.
>you really think ANYONE wouldn't be able to tell what he meant
The main character is practically socially retarded and has no experience with romance. Her development is part of the point of the novel.
>You're just making the girl into something you want, instead of a real person
No, the android said that because despite him fucking up royally and doing a lot of heinous shit, and coming from a society where slavery and de"human"ization is common, and not even being the same kind of alive as he is, her dumb gut reaction to his existence validates him in a way he never got from anyone before this.

>robots have to be "beep boop I am logic man"
Shit scifi taste desu. This isn't bad criticism other than that.

that looks good user :)

Ok it's finished now. I am a bit unsatisfied with the gondola though.

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sadly can't share much if anything as all my shit is online somewhere and I don't wanna dox meself.
yummy

I'm in the process of editing my next video, which I shot on my phone for personal reasons. I'm feeling pretty happy about it. In the meantime, I made a quick little mockup poster for it, and I figured I'd share it here.

Holy fuck that's nice.

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Oh wow this is still up
Yeah I do kinda see some of what he was getting at on a second look. Even a total social retard would at least understand what mr roboto meant there. What would confuse her isn't the gesture: it's a combination of him being something in"human" to her and her own low self-worth making her assume she's misinterpreting it, which she would be because he looks at her more like a sister or a friend than anything else. Shit, "his" people don't even really have a fixed sex or a need for sexual lust to reproduce, a thing the main character would have a hard time understanding. The whole situation is a bit more complex than I was thinking.
I'll have to touch that up a bit later during the first major editing/revision pass.

I'm finally putting my love for music into something by doing album reviews on YouTube. I work like 10 hours a day and someone's always using the fucking computer but I'm putting out 2 more videos in a few days.

youtube.com/channel/UCy0vmswX0MJTzAMAhsaBwag?view_as=subscriber

When I was like 12-14 uploading random gun "reviews" on combat arms I just posted videos like crazy and for some reason they started getting 50-300 views out of no where. I didn't advertise anywhere or anything. I somehow amassed 60 subs in a month or two. I stopped uploading after a while but now I'm back again (6-8 years later).

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>fantasy novel, towards the end of first chapter
>half-elf king of men is betrayed by his royal advisor in the Citadel throne room
>after a larger battle, king and his two royal guards are now facing off against the advisor and his crew of dark magic cultists who are looking to resurrect the main antagonist
>names are whatever, placeholders really

Ralis jerked his sword free of the man occupying its blade and stumbled backwards, his chest heaving from exertion. "Enough!" he heard Gareth shout.
The white-knuckle grip Ralis held on the hilt of his sword was made slick by sweat. The gash in his other arm throbbed painfully, and blood dripped freely from the frilled sleeve of his doublet. His eyes darted back and forth, anxiously watching the line of cultists that stood between Gareth and the three of them. When they made no move to attack, Ralis took a moment to collect himself and turned to face the man he had trusted for decades.
Flanked by Rei and Rai, whose shoulders rose and fell quietly, Ralis found the strength to raise his blade to Gareth, who sat haughtily upon the throne - his throne. "Come off of there, traitor! You've not the right to sit that seat," he growled.
Gareth smirked at this. "And why is that, Your Majesty?" His voice dripped with sarcasm. "Because I wasn't born into it?" Gareth rose from the throne like a snake uncoiling itself. His deviant smile vanished, leaving only the dark hunger in his eyes. "I seem to remember a little insurrection is what led to you sitting your disgusting, half-breed self on this throne. If it weren't for your ancestor, mine would still be alive."

more?

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I really think bits of longer works don't work well for these threads. Without the context it's really hard to judge anything fairly.

Dude review ITAOTS and I'll sub

19, in most original fashion, of course.

i was using an excerpt to gauge interest, really. here's the rest of the chapter: dropbox.com/s/yopwv6bjdeeam7v/KOS Chapter 01 - KINGDOM OF STONE.docx?dl=0
(sorry for the shitty dropbox link btw, pastebin doesn't like formatting and drive has my real name)

Have a bump, while I'll get back to studying anatomy.

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I took this picture and I like it a lot

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Alright, I'm going to list every complaint I have as I read through it below this. I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, I know how much work it is to write this kind of shit, it's just easier to list problems as I go through then try to write up some paragraph about it.
>opening with that much exposition is painful, maybe intersperse it a bit
>evil cult is a bit generic imo
>Gareth being a super secret heir to the throne seems generic too
>Somehow this is feeling like you pictured this conflict as a dark souls PvP fight
>Nameless King guy seems like a generic villain, I really didn't get a sense of why he's such a prick
Honestly my main complaint is that this doesn't so much to distinguish itself from any random fantasy writing at all. I don't think it's poorly written (though the doc does seem a bit broken somehow), just uninspired. Maybe later on it gets more interesting. That's just my opinion from a few pages though, don't let it discourage you.

thanks for taking the time to read it and give your opinion, that's invaluable shit. i agree with all your points honestly. i go overboard with exposition and fight scenes because i really want to get what i'm envisioning onto paper and i like choreographing cool shit. i guess what would be setting my stuff apart is how i'm handling magick (shapeless and able to be bent to the user's will if they have affinity with that element) and that the majority of the story will be following two people, neither of whom are in the first chapter. which is a problem i guess. this was originally going to be a shorter, much more vague prologue but now i'm at ~6000 words and it's not even done yet. it makes me wonder if i should just scrap it and move on, because it being that long doesn't really serve any purpose, and all that time could be spent getting to know the main characters instead. bit of a rant, but that's what i think.

Not mine, a draw-thread user drew this for me yesterday

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Yeah I think condensing it and making it a prologue is probably better. There isn't much strong characterization, which is fine for a prologue, so it's not like you'll cut anything overly important. Just remember that when you're finished the whole first draft you should rewrite the first few chapters because you'll be way better at writing by then. Don't stress, just write. You can always edit later.

i am not an artist. i made this while high as fuck years ago

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Made this. I've been experimenting with Daz for 2 days after dark.

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Nice music to listen to while scrolling through Jow Forums

soundcloud.com/yoyytech
making some music...

I am a swordsman and also made a series about me saving my waifu.
youtube.com/watch?v=vzDJoGPa7fY

More importantly I did 2 baking specials which everyone seemed to like.
youtube.com/watch?v=ZRJDOsdFOtI&t=1s
youtube.com/watch?v=4yOP7IDVt4c&t=1s

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Hey user it's you?

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