what do u think of this thing that I wrote?
thnx 4 reading
What do u think of this thing that I wrote?
Luke Evans
Grayson Bennett
Pretty strange user. Context?
Aiden Young
>short story with no context
Sounds reasonable.
Wyatt King
very weird but in a good way. nice apocalyptic imagery. what is it? is it a story or a book you're writing? i want to read more.
Xavier Rivera
Stopped reading your schzo-christ bullshit at thrice holy.
Nathan Rivera
>what is it?
it's a prose poem, I guess.
>is it a story or a book you're writing?
i'm working on a book of poetry right now, but it's slow work. it's hard to find the right form and style and balance for the type of thing i'd like to do.
>Context?
it was partially inspired by pic related. it's a painting by mark rothko.
Colton Lewis
byronic mood
Thomas Turner
I found it hard to tell who's point of view it was, but then again there's always the chance that i'm being retarded. I Liked the imagery
Lucas Clark
yea I love byron
no biggie. it sort of does switch narrators halfway thru. but that doesn't even matter--it works on dream logic, not on waking logic.
Connor Morgan
bumppinewflnefw