/wfg/ Writefag General- wanna build a snowtank edition

This thread is for writing Jow Forums related stuff and the recommendation of books that are Jow Forums related

Give thanks to Polybius, Archivefag and BumpAnon for keeping /wfg/ afloat.

>It's been unscientifically proven that a lack of (you)s for writers can lead depression, alcoholism, story abandonment, and an hero.

>But it's so easy to make a difference in a writer's life. Just one (you) a day can make the difference between a happy writer and a writer on permanent hiatus.

>Please, post now. Help make a writer's day.

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FALwritefag
Rifles of 'Nam: The chronicles of a squad on vietnam
pastebin.com/4rxQaX6P


Subfag
Captain's log of Uboat 925: The captain's log of the last moments of U-905
pastebin.com/utm8SJLu

>Link to Sticky: pastebin.com/BpLSpmMN
>Last Thread:

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Other urls found in this thread:

strawpoll.com/ge6e4kar
strawpoll.me/16726586
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isekai
m.fanfiction.net/s/12830548/1/A-Mandate-from-Heaven
m.fanfiction.net/s/9730616/1/The-Consequences-Will-Never-Be-The-Same
pastebin.com/0LLN1wxg
twitter.com/NSFWRedditImage

>update links
>add some new stories
>add some tags as needed

oh, also 2 years of this thread now
way, way past the day but 2 years

>inb4 work kills me

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>2 years of this concentrated autism
you deserve some kind of "Tard Wrangler" medal of valor

>
I'll take a look thanks.
That's the first time i've seen her eyes that wide

Hey guys Im writing a story about an American getting stuck with a few russian camp goers in the 1980's and has to work with them but I cant quite get the banter right. Ia there something I can read up on to draw inspiration from?

Poll is still open, comfy in the lead, but a few votes could change that. I'll start writing around 8pm today or so.
Note: "concerning" will involve Jow Forums style trauma
strawpoll.com/ge6e4kar

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Fuck it, I'll make a poll too. multiple answers allowed.
strawpoll.me/16726586

that's one edgy poll

Heya write fags, I was reading JT's Ise/k/ai story and have the hankering for something related to that or like it. Any suggestions?
>literally anything even light novels help me please

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>JT
>Ise/k/ai
wut?

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Isekai
I guess you weren't in the last thread
go to fanfiction.com and immerse yourself in the finest literature on the internet

I feel like I'm about to dive into a shit lake looking for gold
>pray 4 me

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I know what Isekai means you retard, I was asking about JT, I am not aware of any isekai by her.

Go to the last thread and see who's the retard now.

you are almost certainly referring to JD, not JT

We have a whole thread devoted to the concept here user. We're trying to make it a real general like this one but more specialized, and with plenty of good crossover

>ask about JTfag doing Isekai (I double-checked, didn't find any by her in her pastebin)
>people start explaining the concept of Isekai & advertising another thread

>all because one user misspelled a name
kek

just in case you are still having trouble understanding a very simple matter: JD_user ≠ JTfag

'misspelled' then failed to notice the difference even when it was pointed out to them?

which route includes lewding cocoa?

verboten!

says you

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C'mon I got dubs, anybody?

might be just me, but I have hard time understanding the description you gave, making it difficult to comment on it.

Can confirm, am not JTfag. Though I share her taste in women.

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okay now you have to explain

you start tryin' to lewd JT's Iowa and you're gonna end up on the wrong side of a 128mm shell full of chlorine triflouride

on the positive side, you won't have to experience it for very long

not him but JT has this thing with vriting several, very juicy carcters, and then only IMPLY that they fuck. it's a bit frustrating

Fluffy is pure


pure lewd

JT likes her some big girls. She has patrician taste.

oh look, a new thread, wonder what's goi-

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My next chapter of a mandate from heaven is done but it will take much longer comparatively for the next one. Should I post it or post an older short story instead?

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no, don't go away, here, have some Special Relationship!

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>no, don't go away
>don't go
d-did you do that on purpose

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When is there more ise/k/ai friendo

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So is this for fags that like to write stories? I have been on a Hiatus on my book for a long few years. I wonder if I should start it back up.

Hey pal my story on fanfiction.net is some of the finest litterateur on the planet. Fucking fight me

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Gib link

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??? am confus

i uhh...think you have the wrong number

I've had a bit of a bother lately and am for the moment only really moving in a wheelchair, hence the "don't go" things

Okay due do an Exchange program with the russian government a young American man is sent to a pioneer camp for teens. The sole intention being to gather intel on the general russian view point and gather info on the nuclear bunker conveniently 10 miles from camp. Something strange starts happening at the camp, creatures that wilt the very trees and make someone die of sickness from a brief encounter. Its up to them to save themselves.

Fug

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The serious one
m.fanfiction.net/s/12830548/1/A-Mandate-from-Heaven

This one is from the cod fanfic wiki raid like 8 years ago. It's filled with oldfag memes before Jow Forums started to go down hill
m.fanfiction.net/s/9730616/1/The-Consequences-Will-Never-Be-The-Same

Sorry for mobile link, am shitposting on the road at work

>I've had a bit of a bother lately and am for the moment only really moving in a wheelchair
sorry to hear that, hope you'll get better soon.

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>shitposting on the road
Dangerous

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"Are you sure you want to send folder "Monica" to the recycle bin?"

I didn't ask for those feels

playing a dangerous game here

we'll see. I do what i can

Just when I'm sitting behind my annoying patients on the ambulance :)

I'm just wanting the banter to be up to snuff ya know?

Exciting

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This user gets it
Lewding the Cocoa will cause the DotR to occur for whomever lewds her

So, the votes are in!
Comfy Cocoa: 21 votes (75%)
Concerning Cocoa: 4 votes (14.29%)
Creepy Cocoa: 3 votes (10.71%)
Comfy wins by a landslide. As a note, creepy was going to be skinwalker related and concerning was going to be gun gore about makarovs that we're discarded, factory mistakes, and those rusted due to improper packing in cosmoline, which would have been traumatic way to go about it

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Her Papa pushes her around and makes car noises. It's the cutest thing.

it's the name of the character in the picture
not my fault you haven't played Doki Doki Literature Club.

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>rusted due to improper packing in cosmoline

You mean like Sweaty Ben's Discount Nuggets? Only $119.95! Each one guaranteed to have been marinated in his armpit juices for 24 hours or more!

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Expect an update tonight. Not much, but an update.

It might look a little bit disjointed, I have to work on that. Sorry if it throws people off.

I'm hyped for it. When will the first of the comic be illustrated?

When I get word back from this artist. I got three projected cost sheets from out of state/country artists but I have more interest in seeing if I can get local guys.

Would you recommend becoming an EMT or something of that sort?

Ahahahahahhahahahaha hahaha ha!

I'll take that as a no?

Worse. Have you ever seen the mosins that fully disintegrate with rust over time? It would be like that, a slow death being corroded slowly in a confined space with no escape, all while Cocoa would have to hear their calls for help and cries for a quick death. Either that or stories about weapons being seized and destroyed like with pic related

On another note, not sure if I mentioned it, but Cocoa is pronounced ko-ko-ah (ここあ), cause I'm a fucking weeb so deal with it

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Good fucking grief that's dark.

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Anyone remember the mecha-wolves operating in afghanistan story some user wrote?

more not heaven please?

I wrote a horribly-edited story about a marine who'd lost most of his limbs and transferred his consciousness into a walking terminator with a robotic dog, operating innasandbox with his old unit (who don't know it's actually him).

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Like this bitch?

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Do you like the idea of going thru an associate's where the fail rate is 30% and passing grade is 86% so you can have more responsibility than a nurse yet get no college accreditation and only make 15 bucks an hour? (Or less)

Us Lucky Few Update #13(?)!

pastebin.com/0LLN1wxg

I did my best to fit everything and I don't think it's much in comparison to everything but I'm really excited to move the story forward!

Don's story coming soon!

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Is it okay if I post the link to my filthy and degenerate Warhammer 40,000 fanfiction about an Imperial Guard officer in this thread?

What’s the best way to write a gunfight for people not familiar with guns? Obviously the average Jow Forumsommando understand what a Galil is, but the average reader might struggle with terms like “suppressing fire” or “battle rattle” if they aren’t explained to them. Any tips or tricks regarding this?

I think it depends on what the gunfight is contributing to the story; theme always comes first, so base it around what the purpose of the scene is and then work up from there. Otherwise, focus more on the sensory input, how things move quick or slow, heat, noise, sweat, maybe describe it like an exercise?

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He seems like a chill dude.

I don't think that was it, but if anyone wants, I can post the old screencaps.

Thoughts?

Yeah, or this one
That's nothing compared to the factory machining mistakes being "dealt" with, pressure and torture tests, or being an FTR (I'll explore this one more with the next character), that's where the real gun gore and darkness comes in

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Reading now. Will let you know

Oh shit. Things are really hitting up. Really like that James guy. Fucking meme machine supreme.

Next update for Don will be a slow progression into the main arc and his flashbacks to high school.

James will absolutely be everyone's fan favorite, but parks being a closet weab is pretty funny.

Was don a former meat gazer? To make sure I'm following correctly, this safehouse is being done by the mystery suitcase man?

Yes.

Don's arc covers this- I need to actually move that along.

Basically, mystery suitcase man is a small part of a larger machine but one trying to work with and for Parks without downright destroying their own work.

Also

>Parks
>Closet weeb

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That's with a K. With C it's someone else

I'm basically a neet now anyway, so it will happen soon

different user, please explain

something something squid

what squid?

Mon-ika
I guess somehow that's a joke in Japanese, something about squid and Monika must really like it, but doesn't make sense in english.

It's the translation: Mon-ika is squid in Japanese, so she hates being called squid, since the game is trying to represent a translated Japanese VN, where it's actually a English VN. That's why she says "that joke will be lost in translation". Funnily enough, the game was translated into Japanese for JP players. An English VN that was 'Translated' from Japanese has now been translated to Japanese for Japanese players[YouTubers] who have been translated back to English for American viewers.

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>ask JTfag to explain what/who Monica with "C" is
>autists start going on about squids and Japanese puns

Lol, so many layers of translation. I wonder how distorted it could get.

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i just figured K and C meant different people

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Maybe you shouldn't.

bamp

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Should have Don's arc done by tonight.

Well yes, but you don't have to crush my soul, man.

bump

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bump

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maybe user was a retard that forgot how her name was spelled and wasn't able to edit the original post.

t. that user