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>heavy bass
>lewd
>EDM
>tfw I secretly want somebody to use this in a cheap flash hentai
Pic unrelated
I'll give you 2 tokens.
Pic to the left and the vid below:
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Dropping the updated backlog of links to robotic stuff.
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Can I originally have sauce on the pic???????
drew this right after i turned 14
Mizone Imouto to Hajimeru Kuromajutsu Gishiki My Little Sister and her First Black Magic
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just finished this song, pls rate
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Good evening gentlemen
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17 this piece of majestic artwork that I had to make in my free time to not lose my sanity (writing all this to make my comment more original)
pretty nice in generic fantasy game sort of way but why would your best art be from when you were 14
I'll leave this here originol
Toho sprinkler/10
sounds like it's the background music to a shoot-em-up where the target is geckos
Did you use watercolors?
I'd be glad to see the thing once completed.
how is everyone this evening, lads?
I need to catch up on my sleep, I'll see you guys tomorrow.
ink combined with water for the greys.
And just a very small brush for the lines
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Experimental shit, I finished it just today, not mixed very well yet, and unmastered.
I was learning about this thing called the Recaman sequence so I decided to make a number generator for it. About thirty minutes later I decided I should make a version that draws the sequence too. Then I ended up making a postscript generator for it. Not sure if it counts as a creative work but I was really proud of it.
Image is too large to post here and imgur compresses it so at dots to this link where spaces are:
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Still love ya for this banner, Feelionnaire.
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Here, again, is my Mumkey Jones film festival submission. It essentially got into the top 9 out of all the videos submitted, but it's only at 8th place as the votes currently stand. There's no chance of a victory, but if you like it and want to vote for it anyway, you can here:
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Made this when I was 23
I'm 24
Aspiring writer/director here, what really fucking keeps me up at night is the fact that my writing is all I have. It makes me feel especially alone. A fuckin weirdo who sits in his room typing all day. I want to use it as an escape but I can't escape the loneliness.
>age
Nice attempt at data mining
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>generic club remix of normie music
I was about 18 when i made this
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WHERE DID ALL THE TIME GO
20, rapping for a year
>melodic
>singy
looking to expand, hmu with feedback or collabs
Aaaaaaaaand not archived.
I want to Blow me head out of my skull sometimes. I just want to get away.
I like this a lot
I really don't like to try that much, but I have a lot of paintings. I feel really sad today...
>wrote novel (actually the third one I've written)
>at core it's a great story
>prose was shitty
>let it sit a year while I read a ton of classical /lit/ to improve my prose
>came back, read it, emotional response was fuck yeah it's great
>few days later the critical response came in, have to rework just about every part because of crappy prose and sloppy writing
>subtle problems, like some line that implied something that shouldn't have been implied, repetitive dialogue in different parts like two characters stating the same idea, etc.
>things you don't notice at first but which set in after a few days mulling it all over
>lines that were cheesy or unnatural sounding
>been going through and reworking it all
>I was so overexcited I actually submitted it to agents for consideration last year
>want to kill myself because it was so awful and no wonder it got turned down 18 times
At heart it really is a great story and some parts are legit 10/10, but the shitty prose makes me want to bang my head on the wall. I don't know what the fuck is wrong with me. And I'm worried for my opinion another year from now.
Anyway I'm gonna polish it up for another round and try to get published. If I can just get it published I'll die happy, it's the only thing I've ever cared about in life. I think the problem was it was just immature, and I've taken a year to read and better myself and my experience base.
Sorry if I've posted here before about it. It's an ongoing woe. I won't say what it's about since I have before.
Does it happen to be a fantasy trilogy you're writing?
My pleasure, keep launching sides into orbit!
I've just updated to the newest version of gimp after using some long-outdated experimental release from years ago. I really liked how the different toolboxes were separate windows, but now it's all on the same window because that's sleek or whatever. I'm tempted to go back because I hate this new look.
I put handcraft above everything else, this brings warmth to my core and I thank you for it.
Now this is lovely, I might be wrong but this looks like Kamogawa's river banks. The comfiest location for a stroll in my modest opinion.
whats the story about?
i really like that song, especially that heavy note that plays in the middle part, sounds like a C i think
Digitally painted this at 25
19 years old
i'm writing a book about a fictional world, it is not even half done yet (don't have a place to post it tho)
>sounds like a C i think
You should to ask gloom for a confirmation, he's the one who produced this comfy tune.
I'd like to think my editing reflected his intentions.
emcee/Songwriter here. Haven't recorded anything yet but in the process of making a song. Anyone that wants to collab/feature feel free to ask for e-mail while thread is up
>18
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>cloud rap
Lemme know what you think. Maybe some of my other songs are better tho idk they're all shit
I definitely dig your style.
>track not found.
I would have given it a listen regardless.
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rough draft of song I'm trying to record
Looks great
rip 3PAC man. Poor bastard. Nobody understood how fucking great his channel was. Zero hoots given tho.
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damn just saw this homie scrolling by. 3pac was the greatest
apparently he died playing water polo, that's some trout ass shit
That's a little more advanced than 'chordwork'
getting drunk on Jow Forums sucks
There's some gnarly ass chord in there
I like your voice
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holy shit this got me hyped wish it was on youtube so i could add it to a playlist for gaming
comfy tho the real life scene ruined my anime immersion
bretty cool looks professional for the age yet has a unique vibe to it
heard a lot ur stuff like it shld be in a game
reminds me of the band that sing blister in the sun name escapes me
nb
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too loud
really nice depressing vibe your voice is genuine
here's two of my latest rough takes working on another song atm
recent past
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idolizer
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Who does your mastering?
Your track sounds crystal clear, it's not often I'd came across this quality.
Do yourself a favour and fire the guy who put up the picture of the grill, this absolutely ruins the mood.
The only song I made that I feel I put any ounce of feeling into
>real life scene ruined my anime immersion
I took a leap of faith on that one.
>Recent Past, Idolizer
Nifty tracks, this is the stuff I'd include in my homemade cassettes before dropping them in my crush's locker.
Please,please post art supplies,i want to get into ink and you look like just the sort of person who found the formula im interested in
I'd go full vaporwave with this one.
What do you mean Anno?
I would fucking kill to have the fucking patience to learn how play piano. I'd love to at least be able to cover + sing my favorite songs.
I dont know how to use FL studio 20,god damn
I like acrylic inc , dries fast and doesn't smudge.
regular sketchbook paper and watercolour type brushes, just make sure to clean you're brushes throughly after work is done.
Just use audacity
>1337
>2nd painting ever
>Not in the US
kek
here's a song i just wrote appreciate anyone checking it out, and if you have time would be cool for you to either leave a comment about what you thought about it or reply here
True Side
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Not fantasy, not a trilogy. Funny thing is that it ought to be split into two or three books, but I managed to do well fitting 12 years of story into 120,000 words. Had to be tight, which ultimately means I cut all the "fluff" that is usually in novels, you know that crap you're tempted to skip over because it's boring as shit.
Gonna take myself to a coffee shop and try to get it finished today. I won't finish, of course, so I'll have to do another re-read through and make sure I got everything that needs fixing. I think I read this fucking thing about 20 times through in the editing process alone.
Gonna make a video to suit this track tomorrow, just worked all day and night to get it done.
>ethereal noise
>melancholy
>ambient
>experimental
>angel dust
>nostalgia
A prefab club I did in Second Life. This part is the stage where pole dancers would perform,with a DJ above on a throne.
i fucking love this song my dude, it's one of my favourite songs on my phone
I'm 19, 20 in a month. I make DIY videos on YouTube. This is my favourite piece I've made: youtu.be
that's 1000x better than i could do now user
already fanboied over this a couple times but fuck it I'll do it again, I fucking love this user, it's some really good shit
that's really impressive user, is the rifle painted or is it really made of 5 or 6 tiny pieces?
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I published a poetry book sometime ago.
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I make beats.
Unironically liked and subscribed.
Some of the jump cutting during the building and outro seemed excessive. I thought the music during the building was a bit loud compared to the rest of the video. The demonstration was also a bit long (4 angles of the "same" shot).
All that is miner gripes though. Overall it was really good content.
thanks dude, yeh I'm still trying to get my editing style nailed down properly
Rebond gratuit.
Free bump.
Not my type of song, but I don't think it's bad. My only real gripe is that both the lead and the bass sounds are buzz-y and clash with each other to my ears.
I like this quirky shit, user. Do you have anything else?
Seems like good production value, I personally don't dig autotune vocals but the songs aren't bad. They don't really do much to kinda make themselves unique from the genre based on my limited experience, but you definitely have talent, user.
I know fuck all about painting, but I really dig the bright, but muddy/muted background colors contrasting with the striking black making up the cow.
Not a fan of divegrass, but the flags pasted on other media has never been a super interesting concept to me.
There are times where the softness of your voice works really well in this, and other times where it loses a bit of its emphasis and sounds like a teenager trying to quiet-talk so his parents don't get mad. Dig the aesthetic too.
Fucked up my last post, but I was going to say that I enjoyed this and I hope you keep making music.
Fuckin kekers
another short devo cover
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the conception of the song is a split personality with a stronger side contemplating that the softer side plays into it's hands and allows itself to be manipulated by others and is trying to convince it that it's in a simulated reality to kill the persona and take full control of the host, where as the softer side is saying it doesn't care about how it's perceived and only cares for living and enjoying life saying that the stronger side is only conforming to an illusion of strength when in the grand scope of existing as an ever lasting soul the persona perceived on Earth will never match up to the strength of a persona experienced by the same soul in a space where the experience is different and requires true survival strength, saying that it's attempt to grow strength in this realm is ultimately a waste of time and they should focus on other aspects to further the soul as a whole while they are here
i hope the times you perceived the teenager like aspect were the times i intended the softer personality to be speaking because that would mean i done my job, this personality would naturally sing in a quite tone not to bother his neighbors or anyone he was living with :D
but if you perceived that when i attempted to portray the assuming stronger personality i failed haha
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I make 3d renderings with houdini of places I wanna explore
Put this back on page one please.
The vocals and choppy part is neat but it needs a few more layers.
I'd stretch the whole thing over 3 minutes, include synths a bit and maybe a touch of reverb.
Then again, I don't know much about music production.
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I found True Side to be just fine, a little under the leve lof the previous one. I'll make sure to drop a few comments on your channel later on.
Keep at it, champ!
^^ tyty call me champ again and i'll cut u tho
By the way, is there a meaning for the colors used in your videos?
Someone's going places alright!
Just finished this off, I'm pretty pleased with it
What's the verdict robots?
it's rather well done, I think the eyes are a bit small tho
Definitely not on my watch!
I dont know what the fuck this is about but this is why i couldnt post. Someone is abusing the report system or what?
That is legit cool. Nice structures - is it seeded or chaotic?
I got my sinuses in a twist tonight thanks to a coffee (it is like cocaine to me so not always a nice experience) so i cant hear for shit as my ear drums are all popped out >:(
God dam these solar powered bio-electric duality-fluxed quantum computers are finicky.
Everything gets reported for one reason or another. Honestly this post looks like a "hey guise let's ddos this" post
l got banned for posting several links in the same post last time.
-_-
My god
It is my creation.
>ITT
Then it looks like an advertpost, also against the r00ls.
more drunk devo gents
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hope your evening is well
spent nearly 500$ on mathematical perspective books, now I can't go to that concert or buy any videojuegos
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