Yesterday I made you a thread that I need to write a speech for my little sisters wedding. With a week of effort and your help I finally made it and I thought it was really good.
Today at the wedding rehersal my mom told me it is awful and I should be ashamed and rewrite it or she won't allow me to tell it.
Why are normies so fucking evil.
Post the speech desu
this
lets see for ourselves, OP
Anne and me - we always had a special relationship. I will.never forget the day when my parents came with her home from the hospital (even if I was only 4). As soon as I saw her I realized someone special entered in my life. We grow up together did many stuff together like playing with barbies, but I was never more proud in my life whe at age 10 I took her to the ice rink to learn how to skate on ice. That little girl has fallen down many times, but she has never shed a tear, never gave up and after many hours it was me who forced her to go home because it was getting late
Andd now she is here in this big day. Time went so quickly and now from that little girl on ice she turned into a beatiful woman in a gorgeous wedding dress. hope I did everything to make her happy, and I hope she will experience much bigger joy with stephen in her life.
From yesterdays thread. Sorry about the grammar english is not my language.
She was very mad and she told me it is not my day but hers, and this speech is all about me. I was so sure it is gonna be great and it came from my heart.
>Actually following advice given to you on Jow Forums
Bro everyone here is at least as retarded and autistic as you are.
That's really not bad. It reads very simplistically, but that's likely just a consequence of the language barrier. Your mom is just being a bitch.
were the grammatical typos included? if not it's perfectly fine assuming you read it decently. cute, even.
I would have been very happy if my brother said such a speech for me. You complimented her on something worthwhile like strength and persistence. It doesn't sound like a bunch of rehearsed bullshit. Your mom is definitely just a bitch. Ask your cuntface mom what she'd like you to say because you have no experience and don't want to fuck up and give your sister your real speech written down inside a card at her reception. Insane cunt crisis averted and you won't be the "bad guy" by "ruining her special day" but she can see her brother's genuine love for her
Your mom is being a bitch fren. This is fine, good even. Where are you from? You can add that you can still see the persistence your sister showed when she was 10 when ice skating today, and that her ability to press on and to never give up still inspires you today.
Have a nice apu fren, read the file name :)
It does suck but so does everyone else's, plus everyone will be drunk. It's expected to suck, as long as you made an effort, no one will bat an eye.
oh lord is fucking terrible, shows you for not taking english class seriously, i'd be ashamed too
what's wrong with it? i'm bad at english too.
thats a fucking great speech, and your sister will probably love it
I was expecting some shit about how sexy your sister has become or something extremely autistic but this sounds genuine and sweet. Your mom is being a bitch
fuck bro i don't even know where to start. but the speech is basically a story of how much fun u had with her and a shitty story that has no bigger picture.
it supposed to be a little bit about him, but the story should only be relevant in that in introduces her or shows a good quality of her through the story of playing together or skating whatever, its just "oh i really love my sister" which is good it should be added, but it has to be more about her and how hes proud of her and the person she has become, and you are very proud to see her off and excited to see the person she will become after marriage and yada yada, fuck man marriage toasts happen all the time you can just copy other peoples.
ideally you'd even start with a funny story, because siblings have the most embarrassing things to talk about, and then somehow introduce a good quality she has in the same embarrassing event, and then be like praise her for that and how she has grown since then. yada yada
>Anne and me - we always had a special relationship. I will.never forget the day when my parents came with her home from the hospital (even if I was only 4). As soon as I saw her I realized someone special entered in my life. We grow up together did many stuff together like playing with barbies, but I was never more proud in my life when
This whole part is unnecessary flush. Just tell the ice rink story, but flesh it out a bit more and try relating it to a later event in her life to show how she continued to have that attitude. Still overall a good speech your mom is being a bitch and it's your choice what speech you can give. You don't need to listen to her, me, or anyone else.
meant to type fluff instead of flush. Not saying it should be flushed down the toilet.
Weren't you the guy complaining about his English?
You really should have mentioned the new GeForce RTX GPUs...
this is unironically terrible senpai. its bad enough that I actually think you are not larping.
Google sibling wedding toasts and redo this garbage
Sorry fren but thats pretty bad
you just need to have something funny... tell a funny story. that's all people really remember or notice is if it's funny..otherwise it's just a boring ass speech they have to sit through and half listen to.
Just remove yourself from it I guess. I.E. "SHe had to be forced to go home because it was getting late" rather than "I had to force her to go home."
Wasn't that bad though. Tell your mum I said she's a bitch.