When you can rap really well and no one cares

>when you can rap really well and no one cares
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no one cares about rappers who can't produce their own beats unless you have an interesting rapper persona like 6ix9ine or someone like that. you need at least one or the other but if you have both then that's how you become a golden-tier rapper like kanye west for example. good luck famalam.

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Some advice
1.I don't understand what you're saying but that's probably because I'm not American
2.Try to make the underlying bass less prevalent, especially when it's monotone, most songs usually have different sets of bass
Not bad overall though nice song

Oh yeah, can't say there's anything memorable, maybe enounciate yourself clearly( if the lyrics relate to the viewer) or do something revolutionary with the music if you want something really groundbreaking

I've cultivated my ego's personality, it's ready for primetime baby

Not trying to blow up here. Just wanna get a couple checks for a couple shows thats all mane

I said to myself to not click
But i did it, you ruined my night

well if you want an ego personality you might want to choose beats that represent that better. if i listened to that track by itself without reading the op i wouldn't guess that that's what you were going for at all

I was using the term ego in it's most literal sense

so what do you mean by you've "cultivated your ego's personality"

I think that you need to have your own producing style, like that user said
but, musically and lyrically, you seem solid
if there's something I could say for this track, the instrumentals should've been in swing time (and maybe could've been a little more prominent), because it would fit better with your vocal flow