>when you can rap really well and no one cares
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When you can rap really well and no one cares
Lucas Turner
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Caleb Martinez
no one cares about rappers who can't produce their own beats unless you have an interesting rapper persona like 6ix9ine or someone like that. you need at least one or the other but if you have both then that's how you become a golden-tier rapper like kanye west for example. good luck famalam.
Caleb Hill
Some advice
1.I don't understand what you're saying but that's probably because I'm not American
2.Try to make the underlying bass less prevalent, especially when it's monotone, most songs usually have different sets of bass
Not bad overall though nice song
Lincoln Morgan
Oh yeah, can't say there's anything memorable, maybe enounciate yourself clearly( if the lyrics relate to the viewer) or do something revolutionary with the music if you want something really groundbreaking
Henry Perez
I've cultivated my ego's personality, it's ready for primetime baby
Not trying to blow up here. Just wanna get a couple checks for a couple shows thats all mane
Leo Jenkins
I said to myself to not click
But i did it, you ruined my night
Joshua Howard
well if you want an ego personality you might want to choose beats that represent that better. if i listened to that track by itself without reading the op i wouldn't guess that that's what you were going for at all
Bentley Parker
I was using the term ego in it's most literal sense
Robert Allen
so what do you mean by you've "cultivated your ego's personality"
Josiah Wilson
I think that you need to have your own producing style, like that user said
but, musically and lyrically, you seem solid
if there's something I could say for this track, the instrumentals should've been in swing time (and maybe could've been a little more prominent), because it would fit better with your vocal flow
Isaiah Rivera
Thanks for the feedback guys, here's another
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Jackson Watson
nice cover
make your own beats DAWlet
also ask your producers to put swing in the drums
Mason Davis
>also ask your producers to put swing in the drums
Like this?
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Luis Watson
This one's better
Easton White
yeah, like that
of course it could be more pronounced but that track's about exactly what I was thinking of
it goes alot better with your style
and speaking of funk, you could do with some more complex basslines
also your covers are great but you could step em up a notch
for your next release, use pic related
Lincoln Green
>for your next release, use pic related
I gotchu
Jeremiah Turner
thanks
just to make sure you've gained a follower
you really know how to grow
also as another note if you really want to get yourself known, you need your own style yet your releases must be original each in their own way
right now your tracks are sounding too similar, experiment with other time signatures, or make your own beats, or make the bpm really fast or slow, or something
gotta be able to keep the interest of a listener, else you become background music
Jeremiah Roberts
>gotta be able to keep the interest of a listener, else you become background musi
Jacob Robinson
what did he mean by this
Caleb Scott
Stay tuned!
Sebastian Evans
next release should be Gucci Gang remix